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Published: 2005-07-01 02:57:13 +0000 UTC; Views: 160; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 4
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what the rain is aboutindecision
losing oneself in the clouds
unable to determine direction
except that the rain goes down
but down is not an option
i was just there
it's not an exciting town
so that kills one choice
what the rain is about
dancing
water soaked hair streaking faces
clothes molded to skin
laughs lost in thunder
mudpuddle playgrounds
unfettered
free to be lost
in...in...
in...
indecision
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Comments: 5
That kind of reminds me of certain sonnets with the change of mood between the two stanzas. Nice.
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Very good blend of imagery and emotion. Well done. I love the rain.
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ty! the rain is so emotive! worth loving it.
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Wow, pretty good. I especially liked the last three lines 
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ty! yeh those last three...
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