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Published: 2005-07-31 01:46:00 +0000 UTC; Views: 68; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 3
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Description You touched our hearts
You made us laugh
You gave us something to live for.
But when you left
How hard it was
To learn that you would be with us
No more.
With heavy hearts and bowing heads
We continued to say our goodbyes.
But though we know no answer will come
We still, today, ask why.
We miss you
We love you
We wait to see you again,
But til then, we fear,
We lose more years
And have your spirit close,
But still not close enough to mend.

Fold your wings, sweet angel.
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Comments: 8

lizard168 [2005-07-31 16:50:05 +0000 UTC]

i like the picture very much

i like the endin the most, very sweet and hopeful, and what not ^^

keep it up!

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RhayningAcidity In reply to lizard168 [2005-07-31 19:11:54 +0000 UTC]

Thank you. I'm glad you like the picture. That was tricky. The ending was hard for me, I really didn't know what to say there. But, you know...

Dark Prodigy

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lizard168 In reply to RhayningAcidity [2005-08-01 12:06:16 +0000 UTC]

lol...i know

dun worry u did good ^^

looks like u spent a great deal of time fixin it up as u did ^^

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RhayningAcidity In reply to lizard168 [2005-08-01 14:26:41 +0000 UTC]

Thanks

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lizard168 In reply to RhayningAcidity [2005-08-05 02:57:18 +0000 UTC]



dun mention it ^^

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twiztedthought831 [2005-07-31 02:29:09 +0000 UTC]

i love the pic. and the poem ... its funny i read the jounal 1st and thought it should b a deviation

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RhayningAcidity In reply to twiztedthought831 [2005-07-31 14:13:52 +0000 UTC]

Thanks.

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twiztedthought831 In reply to RhayningAcidity [2005-08-01 00:57:07 +0000 UTC]

not a problem

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