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Published: 2009-12-07 13:25:52 +0000 UTC; Views: 871; Favourites: 23; Downloads: 8
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It crossed my mind to tell you I love you,and then it crossed again.
The third time it did not cross but sat
in the only chair. The room was bare.
After sitting a while it rose and left,
only to return again
with arms full of flowers, another chair,
and a table set for two.
I love you. Come in.
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Comments: 49
So touching, and such an unusual approach to the progression of a thought! I love it.
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Thank you very much!
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If you're going to tell them, do it well, but do it soon; never assume they know or let an opportunity go unused and wasted. It's the most important thing.
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That is absolutely true. I remember a moving passage in a novel I read long ago - can't say who wrote it at the moment though it will come to me in time - asking the question of why we withhold affection from those we care about the most. It hit me like a hammer.
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Spend as much time as possible in the blue, then.
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Sweet comment, thank you very much indeed.
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out of the blue?...i could see that thing crossing your mind visually...i don t think i ll try one of these....very beautiful?
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thanks. it was actually the opening words that popped into my head, early in the morning. then the end came. then i sat down and filled it in.
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you're more than welcome, Isabelle, I'm glad it could do that. thank you for saying so.
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those little things that come out of the blue definitely have to be put to paper ... i am a bit lenient in this regard ...
it is a fine piece of writing, indeed.
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thanks very much, kat. no need for the bag of shame... what a fun emoticon that is, though
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This is sooo sweet. Sounds like it comes straight from the heart. :Heart:
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Such skill, maestro! To write a love poem that is sweet and touching without sappiness? Stunning.
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i should get inspired from this and make a photo out of it 
i like it when a poem brings images in my head. sweet concept
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they say turnabout is fair play
and thanks
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this is written by a man who knows Love...Bellissimo!
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Aw, what a nice comment definitely telling that to my wife Thanks!
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That's really sweet and I love the visual it brings.
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Interesting consept
You use expressions and images in ways that most people would never think of, making you poem original and different.
Well done
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I love when words dance in a direction they never did before.
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