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Published: 2002-11-26 23:01:00 +0000 UTC; Views: 73; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 6
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AloneBy Zack Jewell (RingwraithD)
I see others with friends
Laughing, having fun then I see myself alone
My soul desolate of feelings
The one I love never noticing that I do love her
Am I destined to be alone?
Never knowing what it’s like to have another love me
Darkness creeps back into my soul
Death rears its ugly face knowing I am next
Why won’t you say the three words I yearn to hear?
I want to die in a painful way
Alone, I continue to be until you see who I really am
Waiting for the day when you say “I love you”
People wondering why I am alone
It’s because people like you
Alone I will always be
Alone I will always known as
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Comments: 2
Overflowing with emotion.
nice repitition at the end also
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Again, another great poem.
But you see the longer lines....break them up a bit. Some of them disturb the flow...try reading it aloud to yourself and you'll see what I mean.
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