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Published: 2002-11-23 15:40:15 +0000 UTC; Views: 80; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 9
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DarknessBy Zack Jewell (RingwraithD)
My soul wrapped in darkness
I try to remember what it was like
like before I was cought in this
The darkness is over coming me
My one hope is her
She knows she can help me
But will she help me?
In a Void of darkness
She is a beacon of hope...of light
But will she help me?
I may never know
I miss the light
I miss her
Darkness encompasses me
Darkness I hate
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Yes. I'm going to agree with the above. Awesome job.
I'm also going to have to suggest you switch the two lines as well. It flows alot better.
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Awesome poem!
I would just switch the lines,
I miss the light
I miss her
So that it was
I miss her
I miss the light
Other then that this was awesome!
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