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Published: 2015-02-16 19:15:53 +0000 UTC; Views: 4032; Favourites: 39; Downloads: 9
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Please note:English isn't my native language.
If you find any mistakes in my comic - PLEASE write coment!
Anyway, there's page 3 ^^ (did it in new style
), but the problem is, that I don't know, if the text is good (Can someone help me? I'm only studying english and my parents can't help me with grammar ), so prepare for mistakes X(.This page took me so loong, because I had trouble with speech bubbles X(. My GIMP stopped working and Paint.NET doesn't download to my computer, but I finally figured out, how to do them. I hope they're okay. Also While that trouble, I started making far pages, so next page will be out today or tomorow ^^.
And BTW THANK YOU FOR OVER 50 WATCHERS! I'M SO HAPPY, I DON'T KNOW, WHAT TO DO FOR THAT... Open requests... Lower commissions price... Write suggestions in comments.
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Cats on this page: Foxpelt and Pineheart (the medicine cats).
Art, comic and characters (c) HollyTheBlackCat (me)
Warrior cats (c) Erin Hunter
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Comments: 23
dont worry your english is fine
good karma all around
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First time I read these first pages... I didn't understand that much english but now I understand everything and well... you don't know how much I'm laughing at Honeysong and Nightspot xD
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So cute! And don't worry about the spelling, it's not terrible it will just come with time 
here are a few things to look out for! Exiting means to leave somewhere, like a building. The word you are looking for is exciting! Don't worry about it, I get it confused all the time as well
also, some words you are putting together like "learnanything" when it should be "learn anything". Then again, it could be just the software you are using, causing you to only use a certain amount of words. I totally now what you mean since french is more my native language. Don't worry about it, just trust it will come with time, and lots of reading helps too! I would say using a dictionary helps, but I always hated people saying that, because dictionaries are useless if you don't know how to spell any of the word in the first place!
I hope this has helped even the tiniest bit, keep up the adorable artwork!
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Well, at least it's not the shipping thing XD
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XD So cute and funny. And who cares about spelling mistakes if you can read the text anyways? Nice job
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You write akit and not a kit.But greate page but im confused who says whatlbut the eyes are so beatiful.Im sure i write some things wrong to xD
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... I know that, I said it on dectription. -_-
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I know.
...but seriously.
www.dictionary.com
You should use this ._.
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This is great!
btw, this is how to spell excited + anything has a "n"
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Spelling doesn't matter that much The art is what's important
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Yeah, too bad the next page won't be that beautiful
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