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Critique Request: If you see ANYTHING you think could be done better, please let me know! I would love to have tips for improving my comicing.

….Man, I’m not even going to taint this page with my endless chattering. It’s too important to the story development. I’ll simply say I’m pretty durn happy with how these panels came out – esp. that top one. And Barrenger’s stopping Kried from rushing to Wings’ rescue because…well, the very fact that Kried is too weak to even really fight him kind of says something.

Bonus points if you can figure out why I got wings, of all things. (Also…*glances at the title of this Part* *does a rimshot*)


Me, Random Food Word Girl, Flem, & Barrenger copyright
Wings, Man in the Black Suit, Kried, and Wren copyright
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Comments: 8

GhostLiger [2012-02-13 22:54:35 +0000 UTC]

And there they are XD

"Bonus points if you can figure out why I got wings, of all things"

Well you were just calling out "HANG ON WINGS" XD

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Riverfox237 In reply to GhostLiger [2012-02-14 22:18:45 +0000 UTC]

...I actually hadn't thought of that. XD And that's actually not it. Mayhaps you should take a peak at my (very old) DevID.

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GhostLiger In reply to Riverfox237 [2012-02-15 21:26:00 +0000 UTC]

Hee hee, I've been aware of your wings since before you joined dA, but I thought that was too obvious and saw a link between the earlier mentions of how things seem to appear in the Real when you mention or ask for them and wings opening after you yelled out "Hang on Wings". Of course there's still the feathers from earlier to take into account, but otherwise it works so well XD

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Riverfox237 In reply to GhostLiger [2012-02-16 23:53:00 +0000 UTC]

Hey, there we go! And I THOUGHT you knew about my wings, so I was a little puzzled, but I can see where you made that connection. XD I hope that doesn't mess with anyone too much (assuming enough people who aren't already my friends are reading this for it to matter ).

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Wheatart [2012-02-11 01:18:04 +0000 UTC]

Oooooh, can I say creative release, anyone?

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Riverfox237 In reply to Wheatart [2012-02-11 04:27:20 +0000 UTC]

Or something's leaking, which is sort of the same thing, in'it. XD

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Wheatart In reply to Riverfox237 [2012-02-11 08:16:29 +0000 UTC]

Hahaha... "Why do I feel like I'm leaking?"

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Riverfox237 In reply to Wheatart [2012-02-13 22:43:26 +0000 UTC]

XD

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