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Critique Request: If you see ANYTHING you think could be done better, please let me know! I would love to have tips for improving my comicing.

I was going to have more ‘rumbling’ sound effects as the tentacles detract, but couldn’t get it to work right. Does it work okay without them? I may be able to add it in later, but I am SO DONE with sitting at this computer for hours on end tinkering. Also, I completely forgot Wings’ arm bandage on this entire page. Thank goodness for the magic of digital editing!

Btw, I want to point out the fact that YES, I REALLY AM THAT OBVLIVIOUS. But in my defense, adrenaline and freaked-out-edness can do a lot to your ability to notice small things, such as spontaneous wing growth and subsequent disappearance.

And there it is: the end of Part 3, with yet another ominous cliffhanger (because I love those ^^). So, didja like it? Do you want to see what happens next? If so, please tell me, ‘cause it’ll definitely help my motivation. I probably won’t have the whole thing done by the end of Artists at the Ready, but by goodness I’m gonna do as much as I can!

Thanks for joining me!

Me, Random Food Word Girl, Flem, & Barrenger copyright
Wings, Man in the Black Suit, Kried, and Wren copyright
The Real is copyright whoever has The Real copyrighted. It’s sort of a shared universe, though, so that may be nobody. *shrug*
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Comments: 18

GhostLiger [2012-02-13 23:00:29 +0000 UTC]

It's awesome how you're creating this whole story out of this. Part of me wishes I'd applied for this so Shadow could get a cameo XD

Shadow: No, I'm good thank you very much ¬¬

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Riverfox237 In reply to GhostLiger [2012-02-14 22:19:26 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! I'm glad you like it. =3 Lol, that would have been HILARIOUS. XD

RFWGirl: Awww, but we would have LOVED to CHICKEN NOODLE SOUP have you hang out with us, Shadow! Although it wouldn't be quite the same without Riverfox here.

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GhostLiger In reply to Riverfox237 [2012-02-15 21:30:18 +0000 UTC]

Shadow: Yeah, you're right, it wouldn't be the same! I'd still have my ribs intact XD;

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Riverfox237 In reply to GhostLiger [2012-02-16 23:52:11 +0000 UTC]

Riverfox: *evil grin* You know you love my powerglomps, Shadow. I can see it in your eyes!
(Is that SHADOW laughing? XD I would've thought Shadow would be saying that in a somewhat more grouchy tone of voice.)

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GhostLiger In reply to Riverfox237 [2012-02-29 00:10:25 +0000 UTC]

Shadow: Ghostie wanted to see what would happen if dragons ate catnip... ¬¬

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Riverfox237 In reply to GhostLiger [2012-04-10 00:29:57 +0000 UTC]

....That WOULD be interesting. XD

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GhostLiger In reply to Riverfox237 [2012-04-13 18:43:17 +0000 UTC]

Shadow: I really don't remember much about it ¬¬;

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flailingwings [2012-02-11 04:50:51 +0000 UTC]

GET IT? BECAUSE I'M WINGS. AND SHE HAD- Never mind. Everyone thinks I'm crazy anyway.

Plothole Hat. Solves every problem. Except for getting shot. And falling into tentacled wormholes that randomly open up at the bottom of precariously fragile-edged cliffs.
Eh, but y'know.
That's how I roll.

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Riverfox237 In reply to flailingwings [2012-02-12 02:13:43 +0000 UTC]

XD

Hey, no item solves every problem. Except possible duct tape.

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flailingwings In reply to Riverfox237 [2012-02-12 02:38:22 +0000 UTC]

It's like the force. There's a dark side, a light side, and it holds the universe together.

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Riverfox237 In reply to flailingwings [2012-02-17 00:11:29 +0000 UTC]

I LOVE that quote. XD

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Wheatart [2012-02-11 01:19:27 +0000 UTC]

WHOOOOO! Aw man, so cool! And my artistic buzz is just blasting right now!

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Riverfox237 In reply to Wheatart [2012-02-11 04:28:10 +0000 UTC]

DRAW, DRAW, DRAW!

Thanks for all the comments, Doodlee! Glad ya liked it!

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Wheatart In reply to Riverfox237 [2012-02-11 08:16:06 +0000 UTC]

I AM! AND I'M LOVING IT!

Though I did have to take a break to watch the Second Sherlock in the cheap theater! SO GOOOOOOOD!

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Riverfox237 In reply to Wheatart [2012-02-13 22:44:31 +0000 UTC]

YAY!!! (Glad someone is. Wish I could get some o' the people over at AATR to comment, darnit. But I HAVE gotten a couple new DevWatches, so something good has come out of this! d)

AAAA I WANT TO SEE IIIIT but I'm waiting until it comes out on Redbox so I can watch it at my house with a friend.

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Wheatart In reply to Riverfox237 [2012-02-13 23:50:49 +0000 UTC]

Ahh, I know that feeling all too well. Don't worry, it will come with time. I never expected to have more watchers than people I watch, and yet, I do! And that's awesome! You deserve them!

Haha, you will THOROUGHLY enjoy it! It is absolutely hilarious!

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Riverfox237 In reply to Wheatart [2012-02-17 00:11:13 +0000 UTC]

B'aw, thanks. =3 I'm very pleased with the # of Watchers I have. I never thought much on 'Watchers VS People I Watch' because I don't pick people to Watch very frequently; I barely have time to follow the people I already Watch, after all. But if someone impresses me or if I like them as a person, I will Watch them.

Sweet!

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Wheatart In reply to Riverfox237 [2012-02-17 04:50:20 +0000 UTC]

I watch a lot of people, particularly if I want to come back to their art repeatedly. I always try to find time to browse through their work, as it's very inspiring.

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