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Published: 2014-10-31 01:16:45 +0000 UTC; Views: 31332; Favourites: 574; Downloads: 60
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I took up a writing challenge in Wingclan, and here was the prompt: You are a medicine cat. Your duty is to serve your Clan, and save the lives your injured Clanmates. But instead, due to some horrible reason, you do the total opposite: kill.I got a little carried away with my story
It was supposed to be 800 words...mine is 1400 words... Heh heh...It's very dramatic...and quite sad. Anyway, the actual writing part of this will be uploaded right after this. I just couldn't help but draw a scene from it.
Hope ya like it!
Characters: Leafpool (from the books), and Dawnflame (ginger she-cat, blue eyes)
Link To Story: Murder: A Medicine Cat Falls
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This is just a heads up, but this person stole this art
Please!
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How on earth do you get your lines so smooth and non-pixely?
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What brush do you use to create the tears with? Not erasing the insides of them. I mean the strokes you use Before you erase the insides.
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Just a regular round brush.
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I used that, but the edges always look pixely. :/
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Try making your canvas bigger, or perhaps changing your canvas resolution.
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okay.
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I can never right commotion stories , once I entered , you were supposed to only have 200 words , instead I had 3680 , lol
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You should host your own writing challenge. And i would win.
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Welp,it just remind me Cleavepool...Sorry x")
Very,very,very,veryyyy nice drawing,however *^* And...I like the story.
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Is it possible that you are taking requests right now? Your a GREAT cat drawer, and I would love to see Celestialpelt, my warrior Oc in your amazing style.
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I could draw your character, if you want.
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Sure! It'll probably be out later tomorrow.
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She doesn't take requests, which is, y'know, kind of obvious.
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:I I posted this comment a long time ago dude.
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oh my god i'm bawling /;A;\
your writing skills are so great this made me cry so bad oh my goodness those poor little kits and poor Dawnflame and it hurts omf ;O;
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POOR DAWNFLAME! i read ur story it is so good but so sad.
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Wait what I'm so confused when is this taking place
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I'm sorry, but I can't right now.
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I love the way you did the bottom jaw and the cheek fur
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Well, Opinion time. This, this, this hurt me *cries* YOU BROKE MY FEELS
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i didint get to this part in the book yet but you rock at drawing and i watch your youtube speedpaint like all the time but i cant commend cause i dont have a youtube but i still love love love your art
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OPINION POWERS ACTIVATE!: It don't really blame her for murdering her kits. It was a confusing time and well she couldn't think straight after the death of her Hubby She was side tracked and couldn't think of any other way and didn't want her kits shunned but yea know its still kind of sad to murder your kits...but i understand why. DARN WHY DID I WRITE THIS ALL
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Haha! I wrote the story so there would be a conflicting opinion, so it's completely fine for you to feel that way. In fact, I kind of feel that way too, although I also understand Leafpool's rage.
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Yup. I can understand Leafpool's rage too.
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You're part of WingClan? Coolio, I just joined~
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That story made me almost
cry! You are a fantastic writer!!!
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i read this one! but i forgot her name, what was it again?
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thanks river! i want so badly to make a fan fiction account but i keep forgetting my password! but i need help with my story's title can you help me? its about cats and the main cats name is teallilly a lot of L's i know haha so can you help me with the name?
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Haha! A trick to remembering passwords is to make a word document and store all your info on there.
And sure, I'll help with a title. What's the story about? A prophecy, war, etc?
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oh thanks!
okay the story is about a kit named teal, and she does not know it but she and her mother were being hunted be a large group of cats called the peacestealers, they are called this because when they come all the peace once created would be destroyed because they only bring death, her mother is in a group that lives out side the "meadow" the meadow is where the peacestealers live, the meadow is now a place with blood stained rocks and patches of grass the rest is dirt where they have torn up the ground in battle practice, and an old dirt road with a small bridge is in the middle of it with a muddy creek, teal and her mother's group is called the traitors because they are against the peacestealers and the way they are so blood hungry , they do have a boarder. a giant oak tree is there where twolegs used to hang people, if a traitor is to be found on the peacestealers side the traitors are to soon be tortured as the peacestealers usually drag the traitors up the tree and then you know drop them at a height where they break all their bones then they come up with ways to finish them off, so one day teal's father disappeared into the night after an argument with teal's mother for the 8th time, finally her mother follows him and before she leaves teal's mother tells her to stay in her nest whither she comes back or not, but teal gets curious and follows her mother and father after about 10 minutes of waiting, after about 5 minutes of tracking them down she notices that her father is going to the hanging tree and soon she reaches the only few bushes on the side of her territory, she found her father and mother bushed out hissing at each other, she found out that her father was one of the head peacestealers and then she found out that her father had 2 other peacestealers with him and they were there to punish her mother but what her father did not know was teal's mother was a swift and skilled fighter and she had injured all 3 cats and her father was the worst of all 3, as her mother found teal their "adventurer" began as they tried to escape the evil cats of broken dreams and new night mares and the leader of the peacestealers, shadow, is soon on there tails, already starving they have to run away from their own homes to try and find hope only to find endless death, disappointing turns and curves, and the 4 clans.
so I know this is long but i hope that means this will turn out a great first story! thanks river!!!!!!!! and sorry i give you and the hunger games FULL credit for my story's plot! because without you guys i would never have gotten this idea! thanks again!!!!!
~ashley
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That sounds awesome!
Hmm...okay a title (if you haven't come up with one yet).
A few suggestions:
Haunted Past
Trail of Blood and Shadows
Looming Shadow
Not sure if you'll like any of those, but you could maybe pieces of them to come up with a title.
Hope I helped!
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