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Published: 2012-03-12 03:02:13 +0000 UTC; Views: 1345; Favourites: 62; Downloads: 12
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This took HOURS to make. I was trying to make this animation look good. First time making a short animation that isn't super random I guess.Choob belongs to since I got permission for crome to hurt him.
Would have been better if it have noises, and voice overs. Oh well
Anyway Crome had a rat in his cell that was really bothering him, so instead he decided to get rid of it.
Since some of it is going to fast here's what they are saying
Purple eyed Irken: So why does the empire let prisoners near Smeets again?
Maroon eyed Irken: Some sort of learning activity for the smeets, I think...
What ever the case is. I'm glad I'm up here and they're down there.
Purple eyed Irken: why did they have to pick prisoner 457?
And what's that box he's holding?
Maroon eyed Irken: How should I know what the crazy mutant psychopath mad scientist has.
Purple eyed Irken: It's a hideous rat!
Crome: Here's a little present from yours truly!!!
Maroon eyed Irken: Well...that's not good...
Choob: *screams*
Maroon eyed Irken: Um...well at least it hit the defective looking smeet...
Crome: MUAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!
*gets tased and collapses*
Purple eyed Irken: Well...that went well...
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Comments: 64
LOVE IT!!! Its just too bad u cant give them voices.
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This seems like something Jhonen would write (but with less blood)
It looks like you've made a leaping bound in animating, and that stuff is ape shit hard! Soon I take it you will put more frames in the movements and things will move more smoothly.
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Yeah, and learn how to use after effects better to add more smoother and cool effects to the animations.
Irkens aren't meant to be serious, they're supposed to be funny in a dark humorous way
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Exactly, because that's just how Jhonen is! Unfortunately I fail at that
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Lots of people fail at it, don't worry. Lots of them try but some just add humor I find not really funny or dark. Just way too random humor.
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Oh yes he would be 10 times worst than Vicky from the fairly odd parents!
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O god lol it's like chrome go's to a day care
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Yet Choob survives. Again. Fyi, his voice sounds like Skoodge's.
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Seeing that he seems to get beaten up by large creatures and stuck in blenders. He seems impervious just like skoodge
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YOU'RE RIGHT! Except that Choob is Erklatinek, not Irken (borrowed from Zonatello).
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Oh crap I forgot that species. I still can spell that either!
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It's okay. It's not my word!
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POOR CHOOB!
lololol... I can't help but to laugh in his expense.
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He got mauled by a huge rat
And Crome enjoys his pain because since he's stuck behind a counter, he at least got to hurt someone anyway xD
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I bet
RayRay is on the phone with me right now. She can't stop laughing! XD
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It was the rats face! And the faces, but mainly the rats face and choob screaming!
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Well, of course. EVERYONE loves the look of Choob in pain.
RayRay and I find his indestructible self very fun to maul. Thing is, Choob is like Gumby. No matter how much you stretch him, he never gets a mark!
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In that case Crome will love to use him as a punching bag, and maybe a rag to clean the prison windows during other community services xD
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*GASP* I wanna see him used as a rag to clean windows!! 8D Just... ask RayRay and all that first ^^
Also... do you think there should be a Choob plz account? 
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Yeah you could if you want to. Would be cute.
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This is a pretty good animation, it flows quite well. Although some motions are a bit too quick (such as when Crome pulled Ze Rat out of the box), but it was highly enjoyable; even without sounds or voices. I can't say anything about the mouths not matching the speech since there is no speech to match it to.
Indeed Purple Irken, that did go well.
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Yeah I'm still learning to animate better. Once I practice a little more, I'll try to not make the motions too quick. Lip syncing I have yet to even try out yet. Until I get proper voices or learn how to manipulate my voice to sound different, most of these animations will be silent and unmatched mouth movements. I might try looking into trying to find some free online sound effects though. I'm going to still continue with doing these shorts. I'm actually hoping to animate in the next blood sport if there is another season if I get much better at this
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... Now that would be amazing, I cannot wait to hear what sound effects you dig up. I could help find, or upload, some sound effects for you to use.
If you do do animations for the next Blood Sport, that would be even more amazing. It would be hell doing a decently lengthed animation, but it would be truly spectacular.
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That would be awesome! Need as much sound effects as possible
I estimate approximately 3 minutes I could make with animating in a week. A month, possibly 12 minutes if working on it constantly. By then I'll probably be way better at animating, and using after effects properly. Might even make it into one of those short films.
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Okay, I'll try to dig them off of my old hard drive! And I'll ask my little sister if she can download some off her school's system, they have some good ones.
... Now that sounds amazing and doable! 
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aww the rat looks so cuute! lol poor Crome. He got tased
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It originally looks horrible, but since it's being tossed around its actually terrified
Crome gets tased a lot xD
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oh okay. I could imgaine crome going, "Is that the best you got?" Like Benny off of George Lopez.
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He does say that sometimes along with sarcasm
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Thanksn this was a good animation I feel sorry for the Irken Smeets.
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Poor Crome got tazed...But the fun was probably worth it x)!
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He at least was able to hurt the smeet xD
He loves seeing their pain
Though he probably gets tased a lot when was in prison.
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Um do you think you could either slow down the comic, have the aduio fo the comic play or write the writing in the authers's note becuase the writing went by too fast for me to read it and I bet I am not the only one that things that. Anyway good comic and I can't wait to read the real thing.
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I don't have voice actors so I can't place voice overs in the animation. I can write what they are saying within my summary though. Maybe later I'll see if I can increase time between actions when bringing up flash again.
It's a short animation. Just something random to practice my animation skills
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I relize that but I still want to know what they are saying and you are good at animation so please tell me when you are done putting the lines in the summary
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I just rewritten the script into the summary. Hope that helps.
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It probably will thanks and once I am done reading and watching it again I will review the acutal animation story
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It's a celldweller beat I made and tweaked up in fl studio. It's just constant though, and nothing special.
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Aww, well I liked it, it's awesome.
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