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Here it is, the first page to Chapter 4 Irken Corruption!If you hadn't read the the previous chapter, I highly recommend you read it otherwise you will not know what is going on and why Crome is in there.
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No problem~
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Oooh, looks good! And his eyes...those struck me first as being so pretty~!
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dammit Robo! you are really making it hard for me to just draw Kid hugging Crome due to how freaken adorable he is as a smeet.
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on second thought Ill add that to my to do list
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Lol, smeets are usually cute I guess xD
Kid hugging smeet crome wold be cute but Crome might be scared for his life, thinking he's trying to hurt him, lol.
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NOOOO not little smeety Crome! Waaaah TwT *nuzzles screen*
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He's tougher than he looks xD
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:'3 He's still my baby cromey my little black heart can't take it..... waahΒ
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Awwww cute *picks him up and runs* ILL SAVE YOU
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I think a smeet that has been tortured the rest of his life by anything that moves. Might be a bit defensive xD
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I'll ... Give him a cookie
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I guess that might distract him xD
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Then I'm gonna cuddle him x3
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Small baby Crome
*pets him with a 30-ft pole*
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I guess that's a smart idea xD
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Aw how cute, poor little thing. That wound he has looks painful but I like his collar.
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It is very painful, and he's going to defiantly feel it, lol.
Since they plan on killing him soon, this time they didn't really stitch him back up cleanly or properly. So the blood is just seeping through.
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I just died a little inside~ he had such a suckish past poor guy :c
Β *sorry for all the commenting I just got around to it xD*
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Post-traumatic stress he has, and worst is that he could of had a better life if he wasn't as mentally scarred so much to the point of ruining it with his anger issues. He's still kinda mean as a smeet though, but more so in a defensive way.
As for the commenting, nah it's cool, I like comments
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yeah i guess you would have to be to get the hell out. hm did Crome ever figured out what happened to his past as he grow up?
Β i mean it technically wasn't his fault he turned out of who he is.
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He finds out about the project that created him from Crag my elderly Irken who captures him and attaches deadlocked collars to both Crome and Rayne. Otherwise most of the evidence of the project, the tallest ordered destroyed or buried. He does bump into a small section and ruin of the facility but it only sparked a little of his memory, which only caused him to want to leave.
Otherwise it didn't tell him much. He isn't really one to dwell on the past, he's more of a current guy that focuses on what's going on in the present. So he never gets revenge on any scientists that were part of the project because he doesn't really remember, he was too young to really think of remembering faces and thinking revenge in the future. Instead he just wanted to get away, probably reason why he never really stuck around if he ever encountered something leftover from the project when he was older.
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So he''s just that kind of guy to move on.Β
I also remember reading that he became a genetic engineer scientist for a bit? correct me if I'm wrong xDΒ
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He managed to get a job as a geneticist after being recognized as highly intelligent and he illegally downloaded additional data and knowledge for a hobby as a mechanical engineer. Most of his work was for bio warfare, and creating/researching new biological weapons to help crush those that opposed the empire. Also a lot of the work dealt with splicing creatures DNA with others. But he after becoming enraged by his jerk co-workers from stealing his work, harassing him in the work place, he started to become a little nuts. Was Eventually caught downloading the additional data for the engineering after letting his guard down from being so irritated. He was attacked, knocked out receiving that scar across his face and a used old glitchy implanted drilled into his skull. After his "recovery" he started abducting his co-workers, and killing them, and that was how he was fired, and became a unemployed mad scientist. After he escaped a mental Asylum though.
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Wut he did a lot back then considering he had a lot of issues. ek you're good with back strorys i still got gaps for my fc's ones xD
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Apparently the science department was just desperate for new employees otherwise they probably would had been more careful than to take in random Irkens found on the street, since most of the Irkens during that time were more focused on still recovering from that resisty attack, trying to sign up for impending doom 5 to be invaders or more into battling on the battlefield. Crome was still very unstable and very snappy and somewhat mean but he at least got over his fear of people, it was during his time working as a scientist he developed his hatred more and his obsession for murdering people.
I've been working on him for a very long time, tweaking his story a lot, researching some things, and rping a lot to develop my characters.
It just takes some time, lol.
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aah i see now, did he just agreed to take the job? or just got dragged in xD
that's totally true xD I'm a bit lazy to research but i just get ideas bits at a time
all on honestly if Platinum ever met Crome i just see Plat getting picked on all the time by him xD
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He does take the job. He was very knowledge hungry and despite his PAK being experimental it was still programmed to serve it's empire. Since he lacked proper Irken training this was a good opportunity to start serving his empire and to try to at least catch up and at least learn more useful things to do for his empire. He never went to combat training or any other types of training all Irkens must go through on devastis, instead most of his fighting skills were learned on the streets while stealing food items from people or random stuff he thought interesting.
Crome picks on everyone especially those shorter than him. He does that usually because he likes to feel dominant since he was the victim when he was a smeet and teenager. Depending on what your character does he will always give people rude or neutral nicknames. Since he lacks respect for anyone, only time he ever had said someone's name by title was Rayne's name.
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so I'm guessing he's a quick learner too, weeell you gotta be if you need toΒ survive. i also thought cos the way he looked, alot of the other Irkens wouldn't respect him, i kinda did that for Plat cos he was a failed experiment and with his abnormal looks they banished him off Irk. oh and Plat's a tallish shrimp soo xD ahaΒ
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Yes, he is a quick learner. His appearance is odd but Irkens are very laid back. If he's useful, and obeys the empire then they shrug it off, he is sometimes stared at or made fun of but most of the time he's ignored. Also his height saves him from being executed, and is what causes him to be able to even get a job. To Irkens height is everything and his height made a big difference.
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soo he just had to get used to it xD mh well i need start thinking on my fc a lot more nowΒ
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Pretty much but him being programmed to be more aggressive, he's more violent and easily angered. But he seems to develop the ability to be really patience and try to tolerate people who made fun of him or annoy him on purpose. He wasn't created to be a serial killer and it could had been avoided if people were just less ignorant towards him. Only one person ever shows him some form of kindness which is Rayne my vortian. However Crome is 28 years old and does not recognize it. Kindness is something very foreign to him and her trying to show she cares is like she's speaking a different language. He does try to react and figure it out but he ends up accidentally insulting her instead of doing a act of kindness back.
Keep on working on yours, every character starts out not so interesting at first 
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So rayne see's Crome as a friend but he just struggles to show it? xD
I remember reading about Rayne being mute and only communicates by typing her thoughts down to show Crome and others.
and i have'd thought about Plat's past i just need a good Bio for him now xD
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He also doesn't really know what a friend is either. He most likely only looked up the definition in an old dictionary.
Yes, she was born mute, and when she was stuck with Crome, he sometimes tried to translate for her when she didn't have her tablet to communicate with. He of course made her look like a jerk though, but also seemed able to guess her body language and face expressions really well compared to most people, besides the affectionate ones she made while hanging around her.
Cool, good luck with the bio. They can be a little tricky.
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omg i could just so imagine that so well xD haha poorΒ RayneΒ butΒ at leastΒ Crome did help her out on aΒ bad situation.Β
and thankys x3
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OH MY GOD LITTLE SMEET CROME!!!! oh noes!!! D:
and i must reaaddddd the chapters
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He's actually a pretty tough smeet xD
Well to think about it, smeets are kinda tough in general. It'll take a lot to kill him.
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i dont care- those eyes, look at them!!!
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