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RodobagheadDN In reply to InstilledPhear [2013-05-27 15:36:14 +0000 UTC]

Well, all I have so far is that she was a simple girl who had never traveled outside her small, simple village in all her twenty years of living. She wants more than anything else to travel and see the world for all it's worth. She finally gets her chance when a large university half way across the country sends people out to offer scholarships(or something, I haven't completely figured those details out). They hold a big party/meeting to entice people to come and show off in a large town next to the girls village. She has a very pretty voice, so her friend convinces her to try and get a musical scholarship. They both attend the party thing, she sings last then has to use the restroom. She excuses herself, but gets a little lost and finds herself in a small, dimly lit room with a giant wall length map of the country. She spends a few minutes in there, but doesn't want to stay long due to the fact that she hates small, dark places. She would rather be in the wide open under the sun. She is just about to leave when a man enters. She isn't worried, she knows him; he was her driver to the party. She starts talking to him about how much she wants to see the world, to live , and doesn't realize that he's shut the door, that he's drawn a knife from the display. he approaches her from the back and when she turns to face him he sticks her in the gut. She is shocked and scarred as she looks down at the dagger protruding from her belly, but when he rips it out she grabs the candle on a nearby table and gabs it into his eye. He screams but overpowers her, pushed her to the floor and stabs and stabs and stabs and stabs her even after she has passed. The party still goes on, unaware of the heinous act that has been committed. The girls name is called as one of the 'winners', but when she isn't there her friend goes to find her. He does find her, dead and alone. At her service people cry and weep and thank their gods that she is in a better place, but she stands next to her tombstone unseen and unheard. She is a Shade now, doomed to exist with her wounds and agony for all of eternity.

My gawd that was a lot of typing

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InstilledPhear In reply to RodobagheadDN [2013-07-28 07:17:10 +0000 UTC]

WHY DID I TAKE SO LONG TO READ THIS AHHH

Oh, my goodness. That is horrifying. If you have the whole story written somewhere, I'd love to read it all! 8D I could also give you feedback if you wanted it. XD You could totally turn this gal into a (good) Creepypasta or something.

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RodobagheadDN In reply to InstilledPhear [2013-07-28 15:03:38 +0000 UTC]

xD I have it all written out...in my head

Yea, I've been meaning to write it out for awhile now, I've just been busy editing my book (about Caleigh), so I haven't had a lot of time to work on other writing projects.

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