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Published: 2016-03-22 14:45:50 +0000 UTC; Views: 751; Favourites: 11; Downloads: 0
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Chapter 1 - Burning Desire
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EDIT: Some edits accidentally removed part of Kara's robe on second panel so i fixed that. Also changed Kara's ''Oh Arceus'' line due to the fact that legendaries names have been forgotten.
Kara appears! Yuki likes being rude.
This comic is a real mess, the style and quality keeps changing there and there. From this point forward i'll be working with Clip Paint Studio, and i spend way too much time on this page.
Also i suck at making comics!
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Comments: 4
The mysterious thing that kind of looks like something bees would come out of is valuable. Surprise!
The quality has gone up since the start, which is great!
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Beehives are definitely valuable, they look like made out of gold, and they can be used to store living weapons.
That i have to agree with. Makes me want to redo the first 10 pages haha.
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I'm sorry if this feels rude.
But in PMDUnity, in the world of Parai, the legendaries have been all forgotten, including their name.
Also it is mentioned in FAQ fav.me/d6n54el that when you really wanted to mention legendaries, you should use vague title.
So, I think you should change 'my arceus' to something else.
I hope this doesn't count as minimodding.
Anyway, I do see some inconsistency, but you're very good at drawing different facial expressions and that makes them feel very lively.
And, they don't seem too off or feel too exagerated. So, great job on that!
(which makes me jealous as I can't draw much different faces)
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Oops! I knew about the legendaries names being forgotten, but i kind of forgot it on that part! What a stupid mistake |D Thanks for mentioning! Good joke ruined haha
Thank you! Expressions are fun to work with.
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