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RoxyRoo — NeverFall p.002

Published: 2010-05-05 23:45:59 +0000 UTC; Views: 1538; Favourites: 5; Downloads: 0
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Description Next page of NeverFall.

I KNOW THERE'S A LACK OF BACKGROUND DETAIL. I DON'T CARE. THIS IS FOR SCHOOL AND I DON'T HAVE TIME.



This manga starts off considerably different than The Glass River. It's all told as a recollection from one of the main characters instead of directly jumping into action. I'm thinking of changing the text font. It's a little too hard to read...

She's cute though, right? XD Even though she's sad-face? Her name is either going to be Cloe or Nichole. I'm leaning towards Nichole though. It's less common and very american. >.>



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Comments: 6

CheshFire [2010-05-06 03:27:39 +0000 UTC]

NEXT PAGE!!! Yays!!!


The last panel bothers me. The perspective is good on the buildings but her hand... something is wrong with her hand. And I feel like her other leg should be a bit bigger, not as big as the right leg but almost so to keep the perspective.

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RoxyRoo In reply to CheshFire [2010-05-06 04:17:13 +0000 UTC]

Yays!
meh. I don't care. That's what my picture looked like so that's how i drew it.

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CheshFire In reply to RoxyRoo [2010-05-06 04:59:37 +0000 UTC]

Aye, but thats where artistic license comes in.

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RoxyRoo In reply to CheshFire [2010-05-06 05:32:51 +0000 UTC]

meh.

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CloudyKasumi [2010-05-06 03:21:14 +0000 UTC]

: D Lovin' the worm's eye view. And the paneling. x3 Great work so far~

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RoxyRoo In reply to CloudyKasumi [2010-05-06 04:17:29 +0000 UTC]

^^ wormy views ftw!

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