sanjouin-dacapo [2007-12-03 07:11:52 +0000 UTC]

I love the way you coloured the fur, and you make some pretty good profile wolf faces. The anatomy is fair, and the perspective needs a lot of work. The legs on the right sides of the wolves(facing away) are too long. The farther away an object is, the smaller it gets.

Also, with the stripes on the green wolf, you need to draw them with some fur-texture, I mean, make them jagged as if they were fur, because when you see an animal with stripes, you notice that the stripes are not straight, but they have jagged edges pointing in the direction of the fur.

Now, with the green-striped wolf, the front legs are too short, and they look like rabbits' legs. It's a common mistake when drawing quadrupeds so don't worry - even I have difficulties with that.

The grass looks nice but it could be made better with you colouring in the direction which the grass grows - up. The sky should be coloured with rounder strokes and some blending of colours. And the trees should have the areas with the leaves more separated, and the colouring should give more of a leafy shape.

Lastly, there needs to be shadows. Shadows can be tricky, and even I have some trouble with them, but they can be fun once you get the hang of it.

Sorry about my last critique... it was rather harsh. I'll try to not sound so cranky next time

You draw really cute animals!

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Violent-Rainbow [2007-12-02 21:08:06 +0000 UTC]

beautiful!! You anatomy with animals is very good!

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rubyechidna [2007-11-26 00:24:35 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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guitarchick911911 [2007-11-25 23:59:23 +0000 UTC]

Run wolves Run!!! I like the flying one the best!

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