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Published: 2018-05-27 20:15:51 +0000 UTC; Views: 358; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 1
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"Hi!!"
"I'm Armbite"
"I live inna BIG ozcura CITY!!"
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The seed of "Comic about Ozcura!!" was planted in my head by here: shabazik.deviantart.com/art/Deβ¦
Before the Winter it was planted, and now it sprouts its first two little leaves.
To get a child's perspective, I asked Armbite to draw her village with my left hand trick (your nondominant hand draws like you were 5, it's fun, try it!) and drew over that with my adult's eyes.
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Comments: 4
Shabazik [2018-06-01 22:33:24 +0000 UTC]
A big, big city! XD
Many thanks for this Ozcura comic project, Armbite is quite amusing! : 3
While I like the writing, and is in great part readable, could you ask that you add as well in the artist comment a transcription of the dialogue? Sometimes -as a non native english speaker- I have a couple of troubles to discern some words.
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runewuff In reply to Shabazik [2018-06-02 02:03:58 +0000 UTC]
Β Thanks for all the comments! (just as I was getting used to the idea nobody would notice my stuff)
I'll give it a go. I find it a little strange when there is a transcript of the words I just already read, but I know I have no perspective on what is readable since I know what it says. I plan to improve the language as she gets older.
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runewuff In reply to WildcatArren [2018-05-28 09:56:22 +0000 UTC]
(Good. You can read it. My first worry is I'm pushing the boundaries of what's readable.)
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