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Published: 2018-07-13 08:43:41 +0000 UTC; Views: 507; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 1
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"Rivers flow into Polforia from the surrounding mountains, where the water has few direct places to go, and tends to wind about, and slow, settle and pool in low places in the land. Hence, Polforia is a land of winding rivers that cuts the land up into sections that need to be crossed over into. Little lakes and ponds abound, and swamps or vast forests that are 'soggy' part of the year are common. Eventually, the water drains to the sea as the mighty Polf River, but seems to have difficulty finding its way."
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looking over your gallery, i think it's interesting how your pencil work is very dark, but your colored pencil work is bright and solid. the relationship between armbite and her sister reminds me of me and my own sister when we were real little. she comes across as very childlike, which is really good. i know children are pretty hard to write for.
i saw your font "translator" but i still think the lettering in these comics could be more clear. i was especially having trouble parsing the difference between n, m, and h. but your line work and coloring are clear and it's easy to separate the "panels" in my mind.
i think you might benefit from practicing with references a bit. unless your orcs have naturally long arms, you run into that problem i have where i tend to put the elbows way too far down on the body and that makes the arms awkwardly long. that gets easier with practice and from paying close attention to where your elbows naturally fall on your body.
good work though. the lack of panel borders makes armbite's narration feel very stream of consciousness, which helps reinforce that child-ness quality.
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Glad to see someone got what I was aiming for here. The idea is that the stream of consciousness would improve as she gets older, but don't know if I'll finish this, I hurt my wrist with the effort, and am not eager to repeat that experience.
Thanks!
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