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The Debonair Devil.By Kody Kitson
I know that the only place I can see my story told on the internet. My name Is Marcus and I wont be using the names of anyone else involved. I understand this story is not one that most people will accept as truth. However what matters is that it is told and NO ONE ELSE makes the same mistake I made.
It was early January of 2003 in when my wife passed away. it was the big c and there was not much we could do but make the final moments as beautiful as we could, At first it was easy denying the what was happening. Looking back even as I stumbled through the times when the cancer was causing her the most pain, I was in denial, trying desperately to ignore the lonely life that was coming only in a few months by the time my neice was born. When my wife finally passed on I began doting on my newborn neice Anna. She became my world giving me meaning that nothing else would, However as time went on Anna grew sick and I grew mind numbingly desperate.
It was march 30th 2012 when I met him, When I met the debonair devil who chose the name for me to adress him as being Johnathan. He approached me as I waited outside of her room despite my sister talling me to leave and get some rest, I couldnt leave her, I stayed sat there right where my precious neice could see me every time the door opened. It was when the doctor took her for her treatment. A tall man, roughly a couple inches taller than me wearing a black pinstripe suit and a fedora. Now I am a tall guy roughly about six and a half feet tall but I had to look just slightly up to look into his eyes, the pale skin surrounding deep dark blue eyes set in a thin face framed by jet black hair.
"So Marcus I was told by the big guy about your situation" he spoke charmingly like a suave gentleman from the 1940's with a bit of an english accent, much like sean connery. "your sweet little neice is sick, the woman you love is dead, and your about to lose everything that means the world to you all over again. dont worry im here to give you everything you want in exchange for one thing. your first born child shall be born as the child of the big guy." he kept speaking in that same accent striking the nerves deep in me, even though I wanted to look away, wanted to ignore him, wanting nothing more than to give into the dread I felt as he placed his hand on my shoulder. "Wha...what do you want with me, Why does god want me to be the earthly father of his child?" I asked HOPING deep down it was god that sent this tall slim man that even as I was hoping for the best I knew It wasnt god that sent him.
"Ooooh boy did they ever stick his name everywhere. No no its not him its the Morningstar the being you know as the devil. Right now he feels bad for you and is offering you this chance so heres how your life will be if you accept it. your neice and wife will both never have gotten sick and be living with you. your little neice will be there with you and your sister will be well off. In exchange you just have to agree to be the earthly father to the child of the Morningstar." I struggled to control myself as best as I could but Johnathan could see i was stressed and handed me enough money to treat myself to lunch and get a bear for my neice. "Here Marcus get yourself some food and get that little girl a bear, this isnt from the big guy, its from me free of charge." Unsure what to say I stumbled out a fragmented scentence as I took hold of the money the man offered me "tha thank you, I'll think it over."
Anna's face lit up as I gave her a big brown teddy bear with a bowtie and a top hat. tubes and wires were strewn about as she had begun to sink deeper into her sickness. The more I tried to sort everything out the more I found myself starting to feel drawn to contact the man. The world I knew was falling apart but things were difficult to ingore and so I decided simply to contact him by the button I found in my pocket once I decided on it for sure. I told Anna I was going to get a change of clothes and get her favorite book for her from her room in my house.
As I entered my house I pushed the button and in a big puff of smoke the same man appeared instead of wearing the same suit he was wearing blue jeans and a white tank top. "Hey Marcus so made your mind up?, its okay if you want to walk and talk, the changes wont kick in until you sleep next anyways." I shuddered a bit as he spoke those words and nodded walking around the house getting everything that I would need until the changes kicked in. "ye yeah, I want my family back, I want my family healthy, I want to be happy again." I spoke to him as I came out the shower to watch him sitting in my arm chair watching my tv. "hoo boy they sure do like reality tv up here dont they?" I blinked as the man seemed fascinated by the tv shows. "hey Marcus, the big guy was going to put someone from down there as your neighbour to make sure the deal works out. If your promise me youll spend atleast a hour a day eating nachos and drinking beer with me I'll make sure its me who gets that role."
As we sat in the car discussing the details of the deal and what I will have for my personal life, He did not tell me about what would be my sisters life but selfishly i didnt ask about Hannah. As we got out of the car and he waved to me he asked me again "so want me to take the role of your neighbour?" I nodded to his answer, i figured after all that the devil you know is better than the devil you dont right?. Anna smiled widely as I sat down and opened the book to read to her. That was a different outcome for my life.
When I woke up the next morning it was a few months before Jenna got sick only now she never did. we spent the next few years living happily, then Hannah who was married in this timeline had Anna and I gave her the same love and care I had in the last. Jenna and I had become a second set of parents to Anna. My life was amazing, Johnathan moved in next door as he promised he would ensure and stayed there becoming a great neighbour and friend to me and my family over time.
This time around though Anna was born earlier and was 7 by the time Hannah got divorced and became a wealthy business woman who had denied parenthood of Anna. We officially adopted Anna and helped her through it. However recently Jenna gave birth to a healthy little girl I thought that things were normal enough and that my daughter Emily would be the daughter of the devil. Never the less I gave her all the love I could dividing my time between Johnathan, work, my wife, and the girls. I was so wrong. it is now 2019 and Anna's 16th birthday was a few weeks ago and as I decorated the house for her birthday I looked outside to see her playing with Emily. I could swear I saw horns on her head Johnathan had said I would be suprised and that when the childs hit their 16th birthday I would see horns on their head.
I write this because if a strange man comes up to you and makes you a offer that seems to good be to true. I beg you dont take it. I vomitted in the trash can nearby when i saw her eyes change, It was then that I realized that Anna had always been like a daughter to me, and this timeline just sealed it. Now I have to live every day as the Anna I raised changes turning darker, she still treats Emily like a little sister and is feircely protective of her as she is me and Jenna, however the last few nights I've been finding dead raccoons in her closet. I keep the secret from my wife and only Anna and Johnathan know that I know, he's been teaching her about her powers. I sincerly beg you DO NOT TAKE THE OFFER you may just get more than you can handle.








