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e_____________________e its 3:50A.M.I gotta get up in 4 hours...
but I wanted to finish this now cuz I have a stupid test on friday.
Um....
For
Name: Raijin Tanabe
Age: 21
Weapon: Pool stick, bats, chairs lol
Persona: Kaminari-sama
Arcana: Magician
Summoning Method: Evoker
Affinities: Weak: None| Resist: None | Null: Dark | Absorbs: Elec| Reflects: Physical| Blocks: Light
Abilities: Ziodyne|Maziodyne| High Counter| Elecbreak|Matarukaja| Deathbound|Arms Master
Bio: Raijin was born in a small village in japan, he lost his parents during a war and took care of his father's weapon shop ever since. He's a nice and smart guy that likes to socialize and help others. He discovered the dark hour while he was working in his workshop. Not knowing what was going on he decided to look around and met Ryo on the way.
I hope ya'll like it?
Raijin (c) ME
NO critique
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Comments: 17
Ryosuke01 In reply to Ud-the-Imp [2010-04-01 06:17:37 +0000 UTC]
i am aware of that. I haven't had time to do anything lately.
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Haikera-Baiketsu [2010-02-09 03:35:25 +0000 UTC]
If this is your staff character, please state his team as Masters of Tartarus. Otherwise, I'm going to have to ask you to reduce skills & such.
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Ryosuke01 In reply to Haikera-Baiketsu [2010-02-09 05:39:49 +0000 UTC]
Yeah he's my staff char *points at icon* xDD
I forgot to put that on the info.. it was so late when i finished |D
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Haikera-Baiketsu In reply to Ryosuke01 [2010-02-09 05:47:29 +0000 UTC]
Yeah, I was just double-checking, since you might've had another character in mind for staff or something. But I got some suggestions for you:
If this is going to be staff, and therefore boss-level toughness, you should prolly give some kind of resistance to Light and have a different weakness.
Thunder Reign is mostly useless... It doesn't do much more damage than Ziodyne for the cost it takes (then again, cost doesn't matter so much for bosses). I would say take it out and replace it with some kind of signature move.
Lastly, you have Revolution but no physical skills, and room for two more skills. I'd suggest giving a multi-hit physical move to get more out of Revolution. Magic attacks don't make critical hits.
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Ryosuke01 In reply to Haikera-Baiketsu [2010-02-09 05:59:58 +0000 UTC]
Okays!
Gewd suggestions c: i changes naos.
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Haikera-Baiketsu In reply to Ryosuke01 [2010-02-09 14:11:14 +0000 UTC]
Your persona is still short one skill, and should have some kinda of weakness. Maybe weak to force and Green Wall?
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KawaiiSonicChao [2010-02-09 02:54:38 +0000 UTC]
sorry...i had to xD
but seriously this looks pretty cool :3
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Ryosuke01 In reply to KawaiiSonicChao [2010-02-09 05:43:48 +0000 UTC]
KATAMARI-SAMA!
thanks :3!
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Eternal-Nightmare202 [2010-02-08 21:01:08 +0000 UTC]
Pool stick.
AWESOME.
I almost wrote dick.
:/
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Ryosuke01 In reply to Eternal-Nightmare202 [2010-02-09 05:45:15 +0000 UTC]
XDDD
he's a dork
LOL
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Frost7 [2010-02-08 18:22:13 +0000 UTC]
finally another magician.. just like mine..
does he smoke?
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Ryosuke01 In reply to Frost7 [2010-02-09 05:45:52 +0000 UTC]
XDDD
Lol no he doesn't. c:
TY for faving ^^
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Frost7 In reply to Ryosuke01 [2010-02-09 08:28:32 +0000 UTC]
man,otherwise we could have a guy smooking threesome..
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DrCrafty [2010-02-08 17:42:05 +0000 UTC]
awesome x3 an adiquite staff member character, just remember to add a move set and weaknesses for your chars ok? ^___^
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