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Published: 2014-08-12 19:20:33 +0000 UTC; Views: 312; Favourites: 4; Downloads: 0
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Whisper into my sun-kissed earthe lie that you love me.
hold my hand loose enough for waves to
separate your warmth from mine.
Our sweet tea love has been
watered down
and our eyes no longer shine
like sparkling wine
My tan is paling because of you,
your cool eyes glaring,
judging,
the person who I pretended not to be.
Tell to my bitter expression
truths that you hid from me.
hold my wedding ring in your hand
chucking it away into the sea.
We left all the magic
at the Keys.
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Comments: 2
I find this to be a very beautiful and strong piece. Even though it is short it really displays the message very clearly. I really love the imagery you placed into this. It seems almost like a scorn rather than a love, and I think that makes the piece that much better! The concept of those two emotions along with hints of heartbreak are what, I believe make this piece!
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Thank you so much for your beautifully kind words. It means a lot to receive such lovely feedback.
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