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Published: 2012-07-17 20:46:59 +0000 UTC; Views: 723; Favourites: 18; Downloads: 3
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This poem was actually heavily influenced off of a newspaper I found. It was a small press newspaper company, I can't remember the name, but it was doing a report on the major tornadoes slamming the mid west. My teacher had told us to pick a news article and mess around with a couple of those sentences, taking out and adding words, changing the format to show motion, ect.It was really fun to do, actually.
full view please! You can't read it well without zooming in!
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FYI, I read it without zooming in. :3 Also, that kinda makes my heart hurt. D:
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Aw I'm sorry 
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Nyu, that's the point of good poetry, right? I'm glad I could be such a nice, sweet, sensitive guy for you~ ^.^ Everyone knows that's what the ladies really like. ;33
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interesting 
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Yeah, I could see how that would be a problem
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well if other can see it it's fine i guess ^^
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Beautiful! I adore concrete poetry! The emphasis and the patterns you used were so great - I especially love the way the word "tornadoes" twists and downward slope of the description you used to described the destruction of the city.
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Thank you so much! It means a lot to me!
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