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Published: 2001-10-21 23:10:11 +0000 UTC; Views: 370; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 23
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I once knew a girl. a very shy girl, she seemed to smile when left alone. never spoke a word, always sat in the corner, a frown always hugging the corners of her mouth. no one ever guessed she spent her afternoons in bars selling speed to homeless wonders. i visited her one day, when i saw her she was bright and smiling. did you ever know that i love the moon she exclaimed when i came near. i was blown back by her voice, i had never heard it before, ever. she seemed a different person when surrounded by smoke and dirty drunk men. i never saw her again. i don't know if she's still alive, or maybe in jail, but i don't think anyone really cares.Related content
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That is sad, but beautiful in a dark way
Beauty is but a flower
which wrinkles will devour
Brightness falls from the air
Queens have died young and fair
Dust hath closed Helens eye
I am sick I must die
Thomas Nash Song in a time of pestilence
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I've read the 5 you have so far... It seems as though there may be more of this story coming... It also seems like it might speak of more truths that not... Excellent writing Sanguru. . .
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I have to agree with meglocrush (for once) , these pieces are magnificant!
gen.reality
.Β²mo
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mooooooooooooooooooore!
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Silent people have a dendancy to come in one day with a 5.56mm carbine and pump round after round of slugs into fellow co-workers.. nice poem though.. I want more!
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You pulled off the tarnished, forgotten, disconcerned theme very well in this form. The brevity and poise of it does great justice to this idea.
Good work.
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[dygel[eric/kolb]]
stop looking at me like that.
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"did you ever know that i love the moon"
that whole part is brilliant. this series, in my opinion, is without a doubt the best material you've ever posted on devart. i hope these musings influence your "normal" writings. keep up the great work.
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(im not as eem as you think i am)
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the depressing story of my degrading nieghborhood...::::sigh::::
-tank
-=don't fear to imagine=-
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god....i feel sorry for that girl...or maybe not, she lived her life the way she chose to...
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Damn San, Rachel, Sanguru!!
You um, captured that sad little girl in a dark corner very very very very very well!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!
I am astonished.
scared
sad amazed
and well, I love it.
Simply Love it.
-doomit
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Powerful words pour forth again!
Faithwalker
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yea sad....i really like it. Like a short story
MEG
~*-Plunge boldly into the thick of life-*~
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