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StevenLeonCooper [2006-04-27 10:34:00 +0000 UTC]

well I like this one the best, however I'm not very fond of the light brown line rule to the right. I think it would be better eitehr just without it, or if it better lined up with teh photo as far as its height. Perhaps even cooler would be a slight continuation of the photo rather than a solid bar.

The shadow of the computer needs to be more realistic, imagine what a shadow could really look like for a rectangular object, it would probably still be a rectangle only sqewed from teh perspective.

It appears that maybe the line rule and teh photo are teh same height when I put a ruler up to the screen, however it doesn't look that was to the naked eye, and an important thing to remember is that even if it is accurate it may not look accurate and all that matters is that is looks accurate.

Lastly I think that it might have been nice to photoshop that Cyra Logo onto the computer the kid is using so that it matches with the computer that is shown to the right (or take it off of teh computer to teh right wichever is easiest) Just for continuity's sake.

But I like this one a lot, it's very proffessional looking!

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