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Published: 2006-01-01 09:27:25 +0000 UTC; Views: 214; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 6
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Description burn yourself and let it scar down
    as deep as the next incision
    a blind man will confide
    complimentary to your vision

    dont try and get by
    living discrete and misunderstood
    bring forth your fallicies
    and break them until they are true

    spread your arms to justify
    to abase a reality, for when your dead
    you can not die
    the dead do not frown or smile or tell a lie

    they do not bleed, they ash away
    and are tossed about with the wind
    that glides and sways, coarse and harsh
    scaring your face

    you do not bury yourself
    when you have already passed away
    you simply crumble and fall
    and remain in the state which you abide

    burn yourself for it is the only way you feel
    the only way your can relate your fate
    aside from lying down
    being still

    breathing and submitting to the whispers
    even though the words arent yours to speak
    the travesty, at a glance
    still lingers
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Comments: 38

Simbelmine [2006-01-01 19:09:14 +0000 UTC]

it's a bit heavy for me but i love the language here..


..and that brand new spiffy preview ^_^

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ScornedEmblem In reply to Simbelmine [2006-01-01 23:10:48 +0000 UTC]

thank you, is there anything you need for me to explain?

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Simbelmine In reply to ScornedEmblem [2006-01-02 18:54:03 +0000 UTC]

no, with heavy i didn't mean incomprehensible... simply the emotion was heavy.

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ScornedEmblem In reply to Simbelmine [2006-01-02 23:30:52 +0000 UTC]

oh good, im sorry to burden you with such... heavy emotions

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Simbelmine In reply to ScornedEmblem [2006-01-05 15:06:23 +0000 UTC]

no... you can never burden me! your poetry makes me feel, sometimes cry, sometimes smile... i adore it!

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ScornedEmblem In reply to Simbelmine [2006-01-05 23:48:15 +0000 UTC]

you just made me feel special...

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Simbelmine In reply to ScornedEmblem [2006-01-06 08:44:58 +0000 UTC]

<3 ;]

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ScornedEmblem In reply to Simbelmine [2006-01-06 09:03:56 +0000 UTC]

you always make me feel special. how do you say, "you make me feel special", in latvian?

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Simbelmine In reply to ScornedEmblem [2006-01-06 09:54:16 +0000 UTC]

"tu man liec justies īašam"
if you were female, you'd say "īašai" instead... i've heard latvian is not of the easiest languages.
how many do you know again?

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ScornedEmblem In reply to Simbelmine [2006-01-06 23:25:07 +0000 UTC]

aaah! it wont let me read, it. send it to me in an email, i get smily faces, and sutch lol. but yea, that sounds... romantic. i know three well enough to survive on, and about eight hit and misses

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Simbelmine In reply to ScornedEmblem [2006-01-07 13:48:49 +0000 UTC]

i'll write without latvian letters: "tu man liec justies iipasham" >_^
eleven languages?????????? woah..

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ScornedEmblem In reply to Simbelmine [2006-01-08 04:49:45 +0000 UTC]

thank you yea eleven is nothing, i wish i had the time to learn them thuroughly. teach me latvian!!

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Simbelmine In reply to ScornedEmblem [2006-01-10 15:38:53 +0000 UTC]

hmmm... not sure i can - it's kinda hard and you have to hear it to get a grip of the pronunciation.
what are the languages you know?

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ScornedEmblem In reply to Simbelmine [2006-01-10 23:10:57 +0000 UTC]

well, promise me you will at one point. i know english french spanish, basic latin/romance languages, portugese, brazilian, catalan, italian. i was learning swedish and japanese, dutch/german.

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Simbelmine In reply to ScornedEmblem [2006-01-11 14:08:08 +0000 UTC]

that's sooo crazy
you're cool ^_^

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ScornedEmblem In reply to Simbelmine [2006-01-12 04:38:36 +0000 UTC]

im not, if i were cool i would know them fluently by now lol. but thanks hun

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Simbelmine In reply to ScornedEmblem [2006-01-12 15:05:43 +0000 UTC]

shhhh.. i think you're cool!

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ScornedEmblem In reply to Simbelmine [2006-01-13 03:20:04 +0000 UTC]

well... i think your dreamy.

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Simbelmine In reply to ScornedEmblem [2006-01-13 16:34:04 +0000 UTC]

actually i don't see dreams often *sigh*

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ScornedEmblem In reply to Simbelmine [2006-01-13 22:44:36 +0000 UTC]

that has nothing to do with you being dreamy

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Simbelmine In reply to ScornedEmblem [2006-01-14 07:38:31 +0000 UTC]

hrm.... explain to dummy-simm?

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ScornedEmblem In reply to Simbelmine [2006-01-14 22:31:17 +0000 UTC]

calling you dreamy, is like calling you gorgeous, to an extend that could only be described, by you being something from a dream

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Simbelmine In reply to ScornedEmblem [2006-01-17 14:49:26 +0000 UTC]

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ScornedEmblem In reply to Simbelmine [2006-01-18 00:10:03 +0000 UTC]

i take it you didnt get what i ment the first time i wrote it

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Simbelmine In reply to ScornedEmblem [2006-01-18 14:25:55 +0000 UTC]

aww, nope.

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ScornedEmblem In reply to Simbelmine [2006-01-19 04:39:30 +0000 UTC]

well you do now

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Simbelmine In reply to ScornedEmblem [2006-01-19 06:04:49 +0000 UTC]

you are being way too complimentary!

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ScornedEmblem In reply to Simbelmine [2006-01-19 22:41:19 +0000 UTC]

whats wrong with that?

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Simbelmine In reply to ScornedEmblem [2006-01-20 11:15:46 +0000 UTC]

i dunno

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ScornedEmblem In reply to Simbelmine [2006-01-21 00:05:55 +0000 UTC]

well when you figure it out let me know

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Simbelmine In reply to ScornedEmblem [2006-01-21 08:22:59 +0000 UTC]

well it makes me feel confused

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ScornedEmblem In reply to Simbelmine [2006-01-21 19:54:32 +0000 UTC]

ok... ill stop then

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Simbelmine In reply to ScornedEmblem [2006-01-24 16:02:17 +0000 UTC]

i guess you better.
doesn't mean i don't like you though

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ScornedEmblem In reply to Simbelmine [2006-01-24 21:02:36 +0000 UTC]

well... what kind of like... are we... talking... about...

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Simbelmine In reply to ScornedEmblem [2006-01-25 18:16:27 +0000 UTC]

i like your poetry, i like our comment exchanges, i like some things about your personality and i really like your love for cigarettes

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ScornedEmblem In reply to Simbelmine [2006-01-25 22:19:01 +0000 UTC]

oh. ic

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Badsanta170 [2006-01-01 12:19:42 +0000 UTC]

Dude that rocks.


I never liked poetry but i do now.


thanks to you man.

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ScornedEmblem In reply to Badsanta170 [2006-01-01 23:11:56 +0000 UTC]

haha, yea thanks, im not a fan of most poetry myself. but there are a couple of things out there that are undeniably good. thank you for the compliment, im glad you are converted, though im flatered i was the one to convert you

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