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burn yourself and let it scar downas deep as the next incision
a blind man will confide
complimentary to your vision
dont try and get by
living discrete and misunderstood
bring forth your fallicies
and break them until they are true
spread your arms to justify
to abase a reality, for when your dead
you can not die
the dead do not frown or smile or tell a lie
they do not bleed, they ash away
and are tossed about with the wind
that glides and sways, coarse and harsh
scaring your face
you do not bury yourself
when you have already passed away
you simply crumble and fall
and remain in the state which you abide
burn yourself for it is the only way you feel
the only way your can relate your fate
aside from lying down
being still
breathing and submitting to the whispers
even though the words arent yours to speak
the travesty, at a glance
still lingers
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Comments: 38
Simbelmine [2006-01-01 19:09:14 +0000 UTC]
it's a bit heavy for me but i love the language here..
..and that brand new spiffy preview ^_^
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ScornedEmblem In reply to Simbelmine [2006-01-01 23:10:48 +0000 UTC]
thank you, is there anything you need for me to explain?
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Simbelmine In reply to ScornedEmblem [2006-01-02 18:54:03 +0000 UTC]
no, with heavy i didn't mean incomprehensible... simply the emotion was heavy.
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ScornedEmblem In reply to Simbelmine [2006-01-02 23:30:52 +0000 UTC]
oh good, im sorry to burden you with such... heavy emotions
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Simbelmine In reply to ScornedEmblem [2006-01-05 15:06:23 +0000 UTC]
no... you can never burden me! your poetry makes me feel, sometimes cry, sometimes smile... i adore it!
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ScornedEmblem In reply to Simbelmine [2006-01-05 23:48:15 +0000 UTC]
you just made me feel special...
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ScornedEmblem In reply to Simbelmine [2006-01-06 09:03:56 +0000 UTC]
you always make me feel special. how do you say, "you make me feel special", in latvian?
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Simbelmine In reply to ScornedEmblem [2006-01-06 09:54:16 +0000 UTC]
"tu man liec justies īašam"
if you were female, you'd say "īašai" instead... i've heard latvian is not of the easiest languages.
how many do you know again?
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ScornedEmblem In reply to Simbelmine [2006-01-06 23:25:07 +0000 UTC]
aaah! it wont let me read, it. send it to me in an email, i get smily faces, and sutch lol. but yea, that sounds... romantic. i know three well enough to survive on, and about eight hit and misses
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Simbelmine In reply to ScornedEmblem [2006-01-07 13:48:49 +0000 UTC]
i'll write without latvian letters: "tu man liec justies iipasham" >_^
eleven languages?????????? woah..
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ScornedEmblem In reply to Simbelmine [2006-01-08 04:49:45 +0000 UTC]
thank you yea eleven is nothing, i wish i had the time to learn them thuroughly. teach me latvian!!
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Simbelmine In reply to ScornedEmblem [2006-01-10 15:38:53 +0000 UTC]
hmmm... not sure i can - it's kinda hard and you have to hear it to get a grip of the pronunciation.
what are the languages you know?
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ScornedEmblem In reply to Simbelmine [2006-01-10 23:10:57 +0000 UTC]
well, promise me you will at one point. i know english french spanish, basic latin/romance languages, portugese, brazilian, catalan, italian. i was learning swedish and japanese, dutch/german.
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Simbelmine In reply to ScornedEmblem [2006-01-11 14:08:08 +0000 UTC]
that's sooo crazy
you're cool ^_^
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ScornedEmblem In reply to Simbelmine [2006-01-12 04:38:36 +0000 UTC]
im not, if i were cool i would know them fluently by now lol. but thanks hun
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Simbelmine In reply to ScornedEmblem [2006-01-12 15:05:43 +0000 UTC]
shhhh.. i think you're cool!
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ScornedEmblem In reply to Simbelmine [2006-01-13 03:20:04 +0000 UTC]
well... i think your dreamy.
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Simbelmine In reply to ScornedEmblem [2006-01-13 16:34:04 +0000 UTC]
actually i don't see dreams often *sigh*
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ScornedEmblem In reply to Simbelmine [2006-01-13 22:44:36 +0000 UTC]
that has nothing to do with you being dreamy
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Simbelmine In reply to ScornedEmblem [2006-01-14 07:38:31 +0000 UTC]
hrm.... explain to dummy-simm?
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ScornedEmblem In reply to Simbelmine [2006-01-14 22:31:17 +0000 UTC]
calling you dreamy, is like calling you gorgeous, to an extend that could only be described, by you being something from a dream
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ScornedEmblem In reply to Simbelmine [2006-01-18 00:10:03 +0000 UTC]
i take it you didnt get what i ment the first time i wrote it
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Simbelmine In reply to ScornedEmblem [2006-01-19 06:04:49 +0000 UTC]
you are being way too complimentary!
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ScornedEmblem In reply to Simbelmine [2006-01-21 00:05:55 +0000 UTC]
well when you figure it out let me know
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Simbelmine In reply to ScornedEmblem [2006-01-21 08:22:59 +0000 UTC]
well it makes me feel confused
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Simbelmine In reply to ScornedEmblem [2006-01-24 16:02:17 +0000 UTC]
i guess you better.
doesn't mean i don't like you though
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ScornedEmblem In reply to Simbelmine [2006-01-24 21:02:36 +0000 UTC]
well... what kind of like... are we... talking... about...
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Simbelmine In reply to ScornedEmblem [2006-01-25 18:16:27 +0000 UTC]
i like your poetry, i like our comment exchanges, i like some things about your personality and i really like your love for cigarettes
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Badsanta170 [2006-01-01 12:19:42 +0000 UTC]
Dude that rocks.
I never liked poetry but i do now.
thanks to you man.
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ScornedEmblem In reply to Badsanta170 [2006-01-01 23:11:56 +0000 UTC]
haha, yea thanks, im not a fan of most poetry myself. but there are a couple of things out there that are undeniably good. thank you for the compliment, im glad you are converted, though im flatered i was the one to convert you
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