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Published: 2008-10-05 08:08:46 +0000 UTC; Views: 1330; Favourites: 23; Downloads: 14
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Description You wear Caution tape as a bandana,
disco ball tiny dots light your dress,
specking you all over with some unorthodox
zest the preacher man you walked out the church
from said you'd never regain; he and they were liars
and hypocrites, just like Ryan and Aaron
and Shawn and Spence, the two you
made up in your head.

I once heard about this place, joint in the wall
and about cutting up rugs but changed
the thought at just cutting up perceptions,
watching your dancing, ain't you a fool? Dancing,
no one's gonna call you a queen but I'll
call you crazy and you'll call me insane
while I echo that since I just told you,
We're making moves and I'm tap dancing
somewhere close to your heart and to the
town of Doubt, pouring gasoline on everything,
lighting a match, 'I'm gonna burn this town
down! It's an inferno!' Let's yell out in Spanish!

I know that tree made a sound in the forest,
ain't no one around to hear it, and your tears are
real, so real even though you were alone that night,
and we're saying this now, Dancing, we're
dancing this dance to last a lifetime, let's
dance forever to dance the crazies out our minds
and pretend things are going to be alright
now and later. You felt it appropriate and just
to believe the hype, no hyperbole, didn't feel it
a shame or a sin to indulge this time in belief.

You smiled and said that you were happy to feel
butterflies in your stomach without having to eat
them for once. I smiled and said nothing, happy to
be rip tiding out to sea in your eyes.
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Comments: 23

Sully-Bean [2010-12-04 15:31:25 +0000 UTC]

this is soooo clever!
it's stuck in my head like a song! <3

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ScribbledNotes In reply to Sully-Bean [2010-12-06 04:14:44 +0000 UTC]

great! that was the whole point!

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searching-4-my-wings [2010-06-20 13:09:14 +0000 UTC]

The first line and the last few are going to stick around in my head for a while.
That last line especially is one that will hang around in my thoughts for a long, long time.
The randomness and energy really burst through... this is a fantastic, lively piece that had me grinning.

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ScribbledNotes In reply to searching-4-my-wings [2010-06-20 18:33:05 +0000 UTC]

thank you! it's one of my personal favs. good time when writing this piece.

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searching-4-my-wings In reply to ScribbledNotes [2010-06-21 00:52:17 +0000 UTC]

No problem, and it definitely shows!

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cadencedsilver [2008-12-31 05:01:55 +0000 UTC]

amazing, you made dancing into writing.

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ScribbledNotes In reply to cadencedsilver [2009-01-03 19:27:28 +0000 UTC]

I ALWAYS wanted to, too. It finally happened. Thank you.

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cadencedsilver In reply to ScribbledNotes [2009-01-16 03:04:32 +0000 UTC]

your welcome :]
its always fun when that happens, eh?

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ScribbledNotes In reply to cadencedsilver [2009-01-17 20:52:03 +0000 UTC]

Oh, just to write a poem where I capture the energy of dancing. Taking a very visual thing and transferring all that energy to words.

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cadencedsilver In reply to ScribbledNotes [2009-01-18 04:48:33 +0000 UTC]

exactly. and, as a dancer, you captured the energy just right. many kudos.

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ScribbledNotes In reply to cadencedsilver [2009-01-31 21:28:03 +0000 UTC]

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darkhairedangel [2008-10-14 00:30:31 +0000 UTC]

I love the last stanza

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ScribbledNotes In reply to darkhairedangel [2008-10-24 22:41:16 +0000 UTC]

Thank you soooo much. Sorry for the late comment, too.

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christinavk [2008-10-06 15:17:13 +0000 UTC]

awesome! : D

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ScribbledNotes In reply to christinavk [2008-10-06 20:58:11 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!!!

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estallidos [2008-10-06 04:58:35 +0000 UTC]

i'm going to make meaningful comments on the beauty of this piece and how it made me feel when i am fully awake.

you are so wonderful i can hardly stand it.
thank you.

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ScribbledNotes In reply to estallidos [2008-10-06 20:52:28 +0000 UTC]

Ahhhh! I'm glad, just glad you even like it!!!!

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hauntingmewithsmiles [2008-10-06 00:37:34 +0000 UTC]

Thiis. Thisthisthis.


I like it much.

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ScribbledNotes In reply to hauntingmewithsmiles [2008-10-06 20:55:13 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much!!!

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crystalpen [2008-10-05 16:38:20 +0000 UTC]

Love how it feels like I'm caught up in all the dancing.

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ScribbledNotes In reply to crystalpen [2008-10-05 17:25:08 +0000 UTC]

Wonderful!

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happyfruitcake [2008-10-05 09:27:40 +0000 UTC]

like lyrics songs

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ScribbledNotes In reply to happyfruitcake [2008-10-05 09:49:26 +0000 UTC]

Ahh, thanks!

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