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Published: 2008-09-01 06:43:38 +0000 UTC; Views: 174; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 2
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Crept low, around rotten woodwork, throughdead leaves going "crunch" under my foot
steps and into the open canvas of the
world, this blissful coliseum, and in
the middle, a divan with Sleep lounging
away my terrors, resting his heavy
head before setting out to do me in again
repeating an insane nightly ritual of
closing my eyelids tight despite constant
fights and hours elapsing to make me
this lump of unproductive matter doing
the least of nothing for extended
periods of wasted time. It would
end this afternoon, I swore
raising my blade high, catching a
reflective light from the sunlight coasting
through exposed non-existent roof,
down and down fast to cut
the wind apart, hearing that loud
"swoosh" sound before inserting
itself deep into Sleep's neck,
rolling around off it's divan, onto the
cold ground; it made not a peep as
it's curse slowly left my body.
***
Day seventy-four and I barely
remember what sleep is, though my
body parts, major, refuse to function;
being dormant doesn't suffice enough
to give energy to this sleep-less
entity. Such a waste of time, I before
quipped on this act of sleeping,
thus setting out to do my saving
act of regrettably killing off Sleep,
now to laze around the long days and
nights too exhausted to do anything
and unable to ever retrieve the energy
sleep once before granted.
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Comments: 11
Ocean-Flute [2008-09-12 00:30:43 +0000 UTC]
But sleep offers intimacy, and dreams! I wouldn't give up dreams or nightmares even if I could give up sleep.
This has such nice flow. And such a hilarious ending (I don't know whether you intended the ending to be hilarious, but I found it so. )
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ScribbledNotes In reply to Ocean-Flute [2008-09-15 07:05:27 +0000 UTC]
It WAS! I really wasn't sure if anyone was going to get the dark humor at the end. Glad you got it!
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powgrl [2008-09-08 16:29:29 +0000 UTC]
I love sleep. It just isn't always easy to get there.
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ScribbledNotes In reply to powgrl [2008-09-09 03:35:21 +0000 UTC]
I love it at times. Sometimes... well, yeah, like now. Cuz I'm EXHAUSTED.
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powgrl In reply to ScribbledNotes [2008-09-09 16:33:36 +0000 UTC]
I hope you allowed yourself some warm comfy
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ScribbledNotes In reply to powgrl [2008-09-11 03:23:12 +0000 UTC]
Yeah, I got to have some! And today, too. Actually sleeping again. Good for the brain, I hear.
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powgrl In reply to ScribbledNotes [2008-09-12 04:44:20 +0000 UTC]
I hope this finds you well rested these days!!
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ScribbledNotes In reply to powgrl [2008-09-15 07:09:19 +0000 UTC]
Not yet! Though it was for a moment, but it went back to no sleep! But I think it's heading back in that direction again.
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YouInventedMe [2008-09-01 06:53:54 +0000 UTC]
closing my eyelids tight despite constant
fights and hours elapsing to make me
this lump of unproductive matter doing
the least of nothing for extended
periods of wasted time.
love the way that flows
xo!
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