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Published: 2022-03-19 15:19:42 +0000 UTC; Views: 2107; Favourites: 5; Downloads: 0
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Description This week has been hell for me.  I was having a depression episode this week, This drawing nearly got ruined and i felt almost uninspired to draw.  I managed to get this one out though.  But, let me at give you the promise of one of my artworks for this week.  

So, This is my first paid commission that i have done.  The Autistic Writer asked me to do a 4 panel page featuring Disney Fanatic and a fan character he created called Disney Fresh.  It was a parody of the character Dippy Fresh from Gravity Falls.  

Let's address the oblivious pink that's circled around DF's hip.  It was a color error of another drawing i was doing.  I didn't realize I was coloring over this panel and that's one of the reasons why the 3 other panels are absent in this picture.  The other reason is that i accidentally got Egg yolk (I was making French Toast and yes it was delicious) on the three panels.  Note to self: Don't cook and draw art at the same time.  

How it was supposed to look
1. Panel (What you see before you)
2. Panel 2 (Disney Fresh and Writer giving each other a high five with DF saying "You're dead to me Writer") Parodying the scene where Soos high fives Dippy Fresh
3. Panel 3 DF glaring and pointing at Disney Fresh saying "I'm watching you"
4. Panel 4 This is one where i censored the image by including Troll faces and saying Due to the graphic imagery in this scene, it was censored by my beautiful text).  This scene was based on the Deleted scene of Dippy Fresh's alternate fate.  You can understand why i had to censer it.

As for the drawing itself, i think i did a good job.  I gave DF short hair since that's how her Equestria Girls and Ponysona looked and i wanted to keep that for this drawing.  As for Disney Fresh, i knew she would have longer hair as it was part of the description that Writer gave me on the character.  Unlike DF's hair, i can imagine that Disney Fresh would keep it untamed.  

On the clothing, i wasn't sure what DF liked wearing so i gave her jeans and a shirt(The shirt does say DF).  I almost gave DF a skirt but i decided to go with jeans since i assumed she likes wearing jeans more than skirts.  On Disney Fresh, i felt overalls was the way to go.  I knew a lot of girls in the 90's wear overalls and I also based it on the Burger King Kids Club where Dippy Fresh also got his inspiration.  

I think i still need much work on hat wear.  I kind of liked DF's hat design.  She wears a Beret and after looking up some beret artworks i kind of drew her wearing one.  It kind of felt odd if i left that detail out.  On Disney Fresh, i need to work on drawing Baseball caps.  It looks weird to me.  there is a bit strand of hair that pokes out of the backside of the hat.  I knew that Disney Fresh would wear the hat backwards.  

Footwear: I gave Disney Fresh skates as i would imagine that she is the type of person to roller-skate her way around rather than wearing shoes or sneakers.  As for DF, i wasn't sure whether to give her sneakers or Combat Boots.  I picked the latter to have her show more distain for Disney Fresh

As for awkward moments in this drawing, DF was looking a bit masculine and i wanted to give her feminine features.  I don't draw a lot of female characters, so this drawing was the first time i actually drew a detailed female drawing.  The awkward part on Disney Fresh.  I would say it's the shoulders.  I was having a bit of time drawing her shoulders.  It's supposed to be a black shirt, but i can see if people mistake it for shoulder pads.  

I did include the Ace Flag in the middle as i was thankful it was one of the other pictures i was able to salvage.  

I wanted to include a necklace for DF, but i wasn't sure how to draw it or what kind of necklace to draw, so i left it out.  You may also know that these two lack noses.  That's because i don't know how to draw a nose, so i left it out.  Hey, if Rebecca Parham (Let Me Explain) can have no mouth or nose then DF should be fine without a nose.   

Overall, i am disappointed that i wasn't able to include the three other panels of this picture, but i think i did a good job with Disney Fanatic and Disney Fresh.  I'm still upset with myself that i could have done a lot better.  But, what do you guys think?  Do you think i did a good job or do you feel i messed this up?  Thoughts, opinions, concerns and more can be placed in the comments section.  I encourage any form of dialogue.  

To answer one question

You do Commission?  
The only commissions i do is from my friends (Locally) mostly because i don't have myself set up on here yet and i'm nowhere near as talented as the rest of you artists.  

The rights to Disney Fanatic's OC are owned by DisneyFanatic2364 (www.deviantart.com/disneyfanat… )
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AutisticWriter [2022-03-20 00:40:03 +0000 UTC]

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FanficScribe [2022-03-19 16:24:33 +0000 UTC]

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ScribeWizard In reply to FanficScribe [2022-03-19 16:26:24 +0000 UTC]

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