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scripted-silence β€” The Phone Call
Published: 2015-05-06 10:50:56 +0000 UTC; Views: 291; Favourites: 9; Downloads: 0
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Description when I heard your voice
your every syllable rang with the truth of the moment
and my heart leapt as though you had handed me
the key to heaven, not simply asked me to ice cream.

it was one of those days
when the hue of the sky is nostalgic
and I could sprawl on the fresh earth and let grass
spread over me

a wild strawberry growing over my heart

and if you are very very quiet
you could lie beside me
and we would grow old together.

your call was all it took
to shake me free of soil
and send my mind’s eye to the evening

where I could see the two of us
covering our lips in melting ice cream
and laughing and laughing
and staying young together, you
and me.
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Comments: 15

simpleton--T [2015-05-26 15:45:58 +0000 UTC]

Just the bright spot I needed today. Β 
Delightful!

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scripted-silence In reply to simpleton--T [2015-05-27 01:40:18 +0000 UTC]

Β thanks man! glad i could brighten up your day. anything bad happen?

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simpleton--T In reply to scripted-silence [2015-05-27 04:58:34 +0000 UTC]

The poem is wonderful. Β I just woke up on the wrong side of the bed.
You'd think I'd learn. Β Your poem got things rolling right again--took me
to some good memories I had misplaced somewhere, some year.
Β Β 

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scripted-silence In reply to simpleton--T [2015-05-27 19:27:50 +0000 UTC]

that's great

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gelid-ataraxy [2015-05-18 20:19:55 +0000 UTC]

Was this inspired by Your Little Voice?Β 

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scripted-silence In reply to gelid-ataraxy [2015-05-18 20:48:45 +0000 UTC]

yes well the beginning was at any rate, and the underlying ideas throughout. but yes, that's the one.

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hopeburnsblue [2015-05-12 18:14:43 +0000 UTC]

This is so sweet!

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scripted-silence In reply to hopeburnsblue [2015-05-12 20:11:13 +0000 UTC]

thank you

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introverted-ghost [2015-05-07 08:29:40 +0000 UTC]

This is so lovely. Simple, yet constructed wonderfully.

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scripted-silence In reply to introverted-ghost [2015-05-07 10:00:25 +0000 UTC]

thank you so much simplicity has been what I'm going for lately. I've been reading a lot of Billy Collins (have you read his stuff? he's an american poet) so that probably trickled into the style

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introverted-ghost In reply to scripted-silence [2015-05-07 11:22:58 +0000 UTC]

It's my pleasure! (I have not, I don't tend to read a lot of poetry unless it's here on dA. Bit silly.)

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scripted-silence In reply to introverted-ghost [2015-05-07 19:28:42 +0000 UTC]

ah, yes i understand. it took me a while to start actually reading stuff but now i'm desperate to get more it's great inspiration

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introverted-ghost In reply to scripted-silence [2015-05-08 08:10:20 +0000 UTC]

I always tell myself that I'll get around to it.

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Smaranazakti [2015-05-07 03:04:35 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful.

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scripted-silence In reply to Smaranazakti [2015-05-07 10:00:41 +0000 UTC]

thanks so muchΒ Β 

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