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Published: 2015-04-25 13:53:51 +0000 UTC; Views: 315; Favourites: 9; Downloads: 0
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Description laughter and longing are not so different: --
I breathe in both whenever I’m with you
as I savor the crinkle of skin beneath your eyes
and wonder -- are your pupils dilated
or am I just
seeing things
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chromeantennae [2015-04-26 15:56:45 +0000 UTC]

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scripted-silence In reply to chromeantennae [2015-04-26 15:59:30 +0000 UTC]

Ā 

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50ftBuddha [2015-04-26 15:09:13 +0000 UTC]

Ahh...but this fragment is like the cake crumb you just have to scrape off your plate tho you've already ate the whole piece

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scripted-silence In reply to 50ftBuddha [2015-04-26 15:24:21 +0000 UTC]

please don't scrape me off your plate haha thanks i guess

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50ftBuddha In reply to scripted-silence [2015-04-26 15:27:20 +0000 UTC]

Ahh that crumb is as sweet as the whole piece of cake is my point. Everyone takes their finger and catches thecrumbs on it and eats them.

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scripted-silence In reply to 50ftBuddha [2015-04-26 15:30:14 +0000 UTC]

ahh, i see. well, thanks for eating my piece.

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50ftBuddha In reply to scripted-silence [2015-04-26 15:36:57 +0000 UTC]

I often do the same. Have just a snippet pop in my head and upload it to make sure I don't forget it. Lol.. next thing you know Im cruising through my gallery editing and find several snippets are a whole piece that came to me a fragment at a time

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scripted-silence In reply to 50ftBuddha [2015-04-26 16:00:37 +0000 UTC]

hmmd ... yes, i suppose it pays off in the end often i want to extend my snippets but they don't seem to want to be written

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50ftBuddha In reply to scripted-silence [2015-04-26 20:24:02 +0000 UTC]

Inspiration often comes in dribbles

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scripted-silence In reply to 50ftBuddha [2015-04-26 23:34:17 +0000 UTC]

that should be someone's life motto

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50ftBuddha In reply to scripted-silence [2015-04-27 02:40:09 +0000 UTC]

Lol... possibly... but not mine

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Jade-Pandora [2015-04-26 05:30:01 +0000 UTC]

Hang on, Adam, you're not alone.

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scripted-silence In reply to Jade-Pandora [2015-04-26 13:21:51 +0000 UTC]

Ā I know, Jade ... things just tend to get warped out of perspective a bit. Thanks.

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Jade-Pandora In reply to scripted-silence [2015-05-02 10:03:43 +0000 UTC]

Especially during the month of April here on dA it seems.

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scripted-silence In reply to Jade-Pandora [2015-05-02 12:22:27 +0000 UTC]

that's true. suddenly writing 30 poems in a month seems like an ordinary, even sensible, thing to do

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Jade-Pandora In reply to scripted-silence [2015-05-03 04:10:04 +0000 UTC]

Well put!

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