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Published: 2015-05-13 20:12:32 +0000 UTC; Views: 452; Favourites: 8; Downloads: 0
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Description all that has not yet met Death
      (that which Death will never know)
dip your muted hues into vibrancy
—that your songs may become divine—
      and i may even believe in you

for if one moment’s indivisible dream
defied for one minuscule e-t-e-r-n-i-t-y
      its wary
                   Sentinels(the doublestop

before Eve’s first snowflake,standing
                                                           .firm.

)i could perhaps then unlock the Ocean’s teardrop
      or even the midnight poem’s
                                                     diminished chord:
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Comments: 4

AyeAye12 [2015-05-14 11:14:41 +0000 UTC]

Despite being Cummings-esque, it's also really smooth in flow and coherent and great in general

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scripted-silence In reply to AyeAye12 [2015-05-14 20:27:19 +0000 UTC]

thanks so much

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scheherazades [2015-05-13 21:11:28 +0000 UTC]

this is indeed very cummings-y. i love .

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scripted-silence In reply to scheherazades [2015-05-13 22:02:38 +0000 UTC]

i glad. thank you

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