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Published: 2015-06-03 20:10:36 +0000 UTC; Views: 234; Favourites: 7; Downloads: 0
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Description last night
i had a nightmare.

i was writing a horrible poem.
and when i say horrible, i mean
truly, shamefully hideous.

all of the classic poetic devices
i overused—excessive alliteration,
senseless similes sprinkled liberally
like stars,
personification prancing across the page.

it was a carnival of untamed abstractness
a fiesta of wild words
enjambed
in odd
places.

i was working toward an “it was
all just a dream” ending, that weariest
of childhood clichés,
when i woke up.

i hadn’t even had time
to add a title.
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Comments: 6

simpleton--T [2015-09-26 23:56:40 +0000 UTC]

Yup. You made me laugh.
Thank you.  

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peaseblossoms [2015-07-02 19:42:24 +0000 UTC]

this is fantastic!!!!!!!

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scripted-silence In reply to peaseblossoms [2015-07-02 22:02:09 +0000 UTC]

thank you!

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peaseblossoms In reply to scripted-silence [2015-07-21 21:04:40 +0000 UTC]

You're so welcome!!!

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UmbraTigris [2015-06-06 19:32:54 +0000 UTC]

yesss i love this one 

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scripted-silence In reply to UmbraTigris [2015-06-06 19:42:09 +0000 UTC]

yesss

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