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Published: 2015-05-30 15:06:30 +0000 UTC; Views: 198; Favourites: 5; Downloads: 0
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Description i opened the window
and in rushed a swarm of white noise
made quickly obsolete by the aroma
of coming rain.     meanwhile
the carpet’s gray
drained away
and a blanket of dust
leapt from the mantelpiece
and flew dancingly up
to rejoin the sky.
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Comments: 7

similar-singularity [2015-06-10 08:55:00 +0000 UTC]

mmmm petrichor

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scripted-silence In reply to similar-singularity [2015-06-10 10:16:12 +0000 UTC]

mmmm indeed one of my favorite aromas

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d-e-l-e-t-e-d [2015-05-30 21:49:46 +0000 UTC]

This is a wonderful image.

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scripted-silence In reply to d-e-l-e-t-e-d [2015-05-31 12:01:48 +0000 UTC]

thank you

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d-e-l-e-t-e-d In reply to scripted-silence [2015-06-01 07:58:47 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome!

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Livelovemaria [2015-05-30 16:17:56 +0000 UTC]

I love how you express motion / action in this one...somehow it played out like a little movie in my head. Nice

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scripted-silence In reply to Livelovemaria [2015-05-30 21:09:20 +0000 UTC]

thank you

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