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Published: 2010-09-12 22:40:36 +0000 UTC; Views: 296; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 7
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Description The idea of this photo is to show me on the inside, the rain outside and me dreaming that there is really "somewhere that's green".
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Comments: 4

ilikeink [2010-09-12 23:34:34 +0000 UTC]

Agreed. Excellent concept but the composition doesn`t quite hold me. The indistint object while remaining indistinct should be able to more easily impart a feeling of something specific to the viewer. At this point, it is just a grey mass that may or may not be a storage shed.(?)

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scriptedcolour In reply to ilikeink [2010-09-12 23:36:07 +0000 UTC]

Hehe, That's my front lawn, so a tree, bush, fence and the "white" bits are my blinds

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SilverSliver92 [2010-09-12 23:29:43 +0000 UTC]

I really like your concept - - it's a wonderful idea, but there's nothing about this photograph that stands out for me. Maybe if there was more detail in the water-droplets or if there was less distraction in the top-right hand corner?

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scriptedcolour In reply to SilverSliver92 [2010-09-12 23:32:14 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for your response, thanks for your opinion, it helps me when i'm wanting to improve, and I must admit that it's probably not that good as I literally took this as a "quick snap"

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