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scriptoriumwebcomic — Comic Sixty Eight
Published: 2008-02-01 14:43:47 +0000 UTC; Views: 274; Favourites: 4; Downloads: 1
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Hmm, once again, is this better with more colour and more obvious writing.Thanks in advance.
Ryan.
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I think the color works - the sparse color style you've used highlights the important bits without overpowering or distracting.
Personally, I would disagree with Grey-Frog above - the panel size is quite acceptable. The main reason for the dearth of width in this instance is the simple fact that there are only two panels. Unless you plan to continue doing two-panel comics for the foreseeable future, an increased panel size could prove ponderous in the future.
As for the joke, you've once again managed to elicit a hearty chuckle, so I once again have added it as a favorite in hopes of spreading the word.
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Much easier to read but if you still need to make the frames just bigger. It doesn't quite look right only 370px wide.
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