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Published: 2006-07-23 03:56:43 +0000 UTC; Views: 203; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 8
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Description Then, the lies and promises
caked on her flesh, calcifying;
a shell of deceit.

I took a hammer and chipped off the
lies, the chink of the metal lost in the
tiny whispers of I'm pulling into the driveway,
I don't know when I'll be home, I just don't know
what to do.

She consented to acid baths,
the lies bubbling and dissolving, and now
I can't stand the smell of her;
caustic and hard, and I am not foolish enough
to feel her newly revealed innocent skin.
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Comments: 2

halfsane [2006-07-29 20:40:02 +0000 UTC]

I really like this one. Really vivid imagrey. Effective shoice of words. Great.

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halfsane In reply to halfsane [2006-07-29 20:41:08 +0000 UTC]

if I could spell "imagery" and "choice" correctly, of course.

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