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SenselessDancer — Dear Snowman:
Published: 2006-01-17 22:50:16 +0000 UTC; Views: 102; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 4
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Description 'Neath shadows of ice and snow,
Lies a heart forged in stone.

Sun am I
of heat and fire,
the glistening glow of desire.

Eyes of coal have you,
pierced with rings of ice blue.

I've eyes of water
         melted by fire,
Their colour burns
with tempestuous ire.

Medusa reigns your inside.
The strong, bitter taste
          of wilting fantasy.

Venus holds my inner power,
As Zeus contests all penetration.

As dogs bite,
So swords clash.
The body battle never surrenders.

Flesh tears at flesh,
the inner battler
           holds the fire.

Sring comes pounding at the surface.
Venus takes control
and melts stone.

Returning warmth pierces your heart,
Courses through systems of ice.

Touch steams the skin,
As soft summum bonum streams.

My snowman,
Now puddles in sweetest caresses.
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Comments: 5

Kdtheknife [2006-01-29 17:24:09 +0000 UTC]

Wow...
That was beautifully written! The description is amazing... and the words are put together nicely. I love it!

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SenselessDancer In reply to Kdtheknife [2006-01-29 19:30:22 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! Thank you very much!! D

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SenselessDancer In reply to SenselessDancer [2006-01-29 19:30:50 +0000 UTC]

oops...I meant at least. lol. sorry about that!

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SenselessDancer [2006-01-19 00:45:12 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!! I know this can be considered mean...but sometimes I like to be recognized for out-shining SGS...I think it might be right now though....I'm not sure what it is, but isn't she being particularly annoying... Doesn't she get on your nerves, or is it just me...I don't know.

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MorgaineOfTheFairies [2006-01-18 03:19:31 +0000 UTC]

Stunning. Enriched vocabulary, smooth and balanced phrases, vivid imagery, this is SPECTACULAR! You put SGS down as having the most memorable vocab. Wonderful, simply unforgetable...


Morgaine

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