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Published: 2006-01-21 01:37:44 +0000 UTC; Views: 78; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 3
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There is a voice in my headthat whispers to me,
sometimes good--
sometimes bad.
It shout's "stop"
but I don't hear the warning.
It slithers, "don't be rash!"
but I heed no signal.
Ignorant to protests,
Ignorant to that voice,
I slide through life
playing the game:
Under this door be need,
here lies hate,
here lies that faith and trust
I don't placate.
This voice inside my head
screams in my ear
words I don't want to hear.
They may be truth,
They may be lie,
but performed they are not!
I try not to be rash,
I try to be good.
But moods come and go;
'foul and fair/
fair and foul'
A little circle performed inside my bowel.
Strange how that voice,
that I do not heed,
does not cease!
Constant drowning in impreciation.
I need peace!
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Comments: 5
Very nice poem for being written in a few minutes, and revise it next time 
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yeah...I have bad habits....like not looking over my work...lol
And Thanks!
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it is emotional, good, and it is an interesting use of auditory sensations instead of visual, a rather radical concept to me
one complaint, though...
i think you meant peace, not piece, otherwise, you should explain this piece to me a bit more...
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OOPS!! You're absolutely correct 
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