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Published: 2006-02-17 19:41:49 +0000 UTC; Views: 54; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 1
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Description "I've a kiss for you,"
the young boy says.
And I hold my head up
waiting for his.
But his head never tilts
towards mine
as I long for it,
but his hand grasps mine
and there he places
his chocolate kiss.
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Comments: 6

AuthenticLogic [2006-02-18 21:25:31 +0000 UTC]

Comical, indeed.
And nothing oooeygoooey in it, great job!

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SenselessDancer In reply to AuthenticLogic [2006-02-19 21:44:56 +0000 UTC]

Thanks...I sometimes like to avoid the "oooeygoooey". It's overrated!

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ashellessmind [2006-02-18 03:02:02 +0000 UTC]

Hah.
This made me laugh.
Nice work. You brought my spirits up a little.

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SenselessDancer In reply to ashellessmind [2006-02-19 21:45:45 +0000 UTC]

Glad to help.

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KaoroDono [2006-02-17 19:44:00 +0000 UTC]

Short but great! Really cool poem, non traditional one! I like it!!

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SenselessDancer In reply to KaoroDono [2006-02-17 20:43:52 +0000 UTC]

Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed it!

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