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Published: 2006-02-01 23:03:38 +0000 UTC; Views: 48; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 3
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Description My dirty little secret
is gone,
it's alright.
My long shameful reminder
was in the black book
I burned last night.
No carbon-copy
of my writing,
No witness, no frame,
No incessant reminder,
gone, all gone--away!
No need to worry,
my dirty little secret
burned at the stake.
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Comments: 6

AuthenticLogic [2006-02-16 02:46:54 +0000 UTC]

TELL ME TEH SECRET
seriously, nice job

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SenselessDancer In reply to AuthenticLogic [2006-02-17 15:25:26 +0000 UTC]

haha. I don't really have a secret, it was just so possible to write this crazy little poem! Thanks, I'm glad you liked it!

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MorgaineOfTheFairies [2006-02-02 21:54:39 +0000 UTC]

I like it dahling, it shows personality and your last line is a killer ending!


Morgaine

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SenselessDancer In reply to MorgaineOfTheFairies [2006-02-04 02:23:04 +0000 UTC]

Awww, Thanks!! I'm really glad you liked the ending!! I did a little dance when I came up with that....although I was walking, so I couldn't do big jump and dance -- it was more like and extra big smile and a little hop. lol.! Thanks hun!!

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Nah-chan [2006-02-01 23:05:23 +0000 UTC]

wow! that's really cool!!

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SenselessDancer In reply to Nah-chan [2006-02-01 23:48:23 +0000 UTC]

thanks! Glad you liked it!

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