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Like an overcrowded gardenI bloom,
Like limited eye-sight
I flounder,
Like a barred door
I venture,
Like a secret passage
I scramble,
Like a light in shadow
I shine,
Like sharp teeth
I grip,
Like tigersβ claws
I pierce,
Like muffled voices
I cry,
Like slicing movements
I run,
Like howling wind
I breathe,
Like burning spice
I sizzle,
Like pounding drums
I move,
Like soft earth
I mound,
Like pouring rain
I shatter,
Like burning fire
I mend,
Like hard glass
I tremble,
Like a mellow song
I sway,
Like an overbearing mountain
I enclose,
Like an open book
I read.
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Comments: 6
crazypotatoeOo [2006-09-16 09:57:32 +0000 UTC]
this is goood! it comes across as new and different, and I certain parts, for example:
"Like pouring rain
I shatter,
Like burning fire
I mend,
Like hard glass
I tremble"
=3
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SenselessDancer In reply to crazypotatoeOo [2006-11-19 22:13:45 +0000 UTC]
Thank you so much! I'm really glad you like it!
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cuatfrannys [2006-06-05 18:17:14 +0000 UTC]
hey! i really like your similies. they're so personal kind of but at the same time i can really connect with it! great work
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SenselessDancer In reply to cuatfrannys [2006-06-06 20:46:48 +0000 UTC]
Thank you very much!! I'm really glad you were able to connect with it.
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