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Published: 2007-03-04 16:56:41 +0000 UTC; Views: 206; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 8
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Description Seen without clothes
Shadowed by the window
Highlights of gold
Figures of a female body

Hidden in bushes
Crowded by leaves
Entwined in the earth
Speechless as the ground

Body as silk
Curled beneath the sheets
Asleep by the light
Warm as milk.
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Comments: 4

confusedRnormal [2007-03-20 19:56:43 +0000 UTC]

It's been a fair bit since I have seen anything you wrote!

The imagery twists upon and about itself, entwining the piece in countless hidden meanings; hehe, this first time I approached it, and I fell in, searching for as many hidden meanings, finding as many links, metaphorical and direct, hidden in this tangle of imagery.

Beautiful.

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SenselessDancer In reply to confusedRnormal [2007-03-25 13:46:25 +0000 UTC]

haha thanks. You're absolutely correct. They're are a lot of hidden meanings in this piece. I tried to make a lot of them metaphorical, but I had to make some direct as well to illustrate and highlight those metaphorical ones.

Thank you!

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Kdtheknife [2007-03-04 20:04:34 +0000 UTC]

That's great "highlights of gold" Great imagery, Aimee.This poem feels very.. well, warm. I like it!

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SenselessDancer In reply to Kdtheknife [2007-03-05 23:50:32 +0000 UTC]

Aww, thanks KDB.

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