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SentimentallyScared — Fight It.
Published: 2006-07-22 06:13:14 +0000 UTC; Views: 165; Favourites: 4; Downloads: 3
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Description A swift elbow to his ribs didn't seem to phase him,
Neither did teeth, dug into his finger.
Didn't stop him, from forcing his fingers deeper down.
Those disgusting, cigarette tasting fingers.

And I would give anything, to have torn flesh from bone,
Would have wiped his contorted smile, clean from his face.
To hear him scream as his blood filled my mouth.
To let it drip down as teeth scraped the bone.

Stomach acid dances and rises, making heads spin,
The harder you fight it, fight him,
The more trauma seeps, into your system,
The more he tries to invade, your system.  

Hold onto yourself, it's going to be a bumpy ride,
Hold onto yourself, you can't hide from it, this time.
Because tomorrow will never come soon enough,
And yesterday will remain all to clear.
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Comments: 15

collected-dark [2006-09-21 13:40:47 +0000 UTC]

This piece is very vivid... you can feel the trauma in it.. its very sad to read

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SentimentallyScared In reply to collected-dark [2006-10-03 05:30:36 +0000 UTC]

I'm not too sure what to say. I guess, it should have a certain amount of trauma to it. I'm sorry it was sad to read.

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PsychoBunnyGrl [2006-09-19 03:19:13 +0000 UTC]

Its strong, and piercing. Nice job.

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SentimentallyScared In reply to PsychoBunnyGrl [2006-09-19 10:54:02 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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PsychoBunnyGrl In reply to SentimentallyScared [2006-09-19 17:59:42 +0000 UTC]

Welcome!

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SeeleVerloren [2006-07-23 22:14:20 +0000 UTC]

Oh wow, very emotional.
What inspired it, may I ask?

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SentimentallyScared In reply to SeeleVerloren [2006-07-23 22:22:33 +0000 UTC]

Thank you.
My step-cousin.

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SeeleVerloren In reply to SentimentallyScared [2006-07-23 22:39:39 +0000 UTC]

Ahh. I hope she/he is alright.

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SentimentallyScared In reply to SeeleVerloren [2006-07-23 22:54:54 +0000 UTC]

Oh, he's just fine.

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SeeleVerloren In reply to SentimentallyScared [2006-07-23 22:57:26 +0000 UTC]

Eek. I think I totally read this the wrong way x.x
I'm really sorry.

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SentimentallyScared In reply to SeeleVerloren [2006-07-23 23:05:45 +0000 UTC]

That's fine.

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ElyLightbringer [2006-07-23 14:41:37 +0000 UTC]

Very emotional piece. Good job.

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SentimentallyScared In reply to ElyLightbringer [2006-07-23 16:12:53 +0000 UTC]

Thank you.

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xTwistedxIllusionsx [2006-07-22 10:24:46 +0000 UTC]

very good this piece flows nicely and i can feel the emotion behind it.. a great piece

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SentimentallyScared In reply to xTwistedxIllusionsx [2006-07-22 16:18:46 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much!

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