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SentimentallyScared — .Regaining This.
Published: 2006-09-05 03:44:59 +0000 UTC; Views: 253; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 0
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Description I could flood the world, cleanse this place, tonight,
A tidal wave of unadulterated sentiment, crashing down,
Snapping bones, as twigs in a tempest,
Shattering skulls, like a great blanket of bullets upon impact.  

Lost amid the mist of a diminishing dream,
Hearts frequently perish between the lines, where nightmares lurk,
Ready to snatch away the sweet air from greedy lungs,
Smiles, from wide eyes, replacing them with tears.

Tiny hands tug at corpses of deceased loved ones, but,
The comfort I so long for, will not be found against cold chests of stone,
Nor slack trunks of arms and insipid eyes.
Rather, between my own cold thighs.
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Comments: 18

Fibie [2006-09-30 15:25:16 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful. Great flow, great descriptions. I love it.

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Fibie In reply to Fibie [2006-10-03 05:18:20 +0000 UTC]

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SentimentallyScared In reply to Fibie [2006-10-03 04:55:01 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! I'm glad you like it.

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collected-dark [2006-09-21 13:42:21 +0000 UTC]

I love reading your work because you can always visualise the imagery in it. its a pleasure to read..

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SentimentallyScared In reply to collected-dark [2006-10-03 05:28:52 +0000 UTC]

Why, thank you very much!

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PsychoBunnyGrl [2006-09-19 18:25:59 +0000 UTC]

Dark, Cold, Deep, and utterly breath-taking.

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SentimentallyScared In reply to PsychoBunnyGrl [2006-11-06 12:37:49 +0000 UTC]

Why, thank you!!

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PsychoBunnyGrl In reply to SentimentallyScared [2006-11-06 13:37:20 +0000 UTC]

^_^ Welcome!

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ElyLightbringer [2006-09-18 14:30:51 +0000 UTC]

awesome, as always

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SentimentallyScared In reply to ElyLightbringer [2006-09-19 00:02:28 +0000 UTC]

Why, thank you my dear.

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without-chainsaw [2006-09-06 01:51:32 +0000 UTC]

The first line sounds like something biblical, except I beleive you.

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SentimentallyScared In reply to without-chainsaw [2006-09-06 02:21:54 +0000 UTC]

It took me a minute to get that.

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scarredsodeep [2006-09-05 15:03:37 +0000 UTC]

I like the first line the best.

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SentimentallyScared In reply to scarredsodeep [2006-09-05 22:01:40 +0000 UTC]

Thanks.

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without-chainsaw [2006-09-05 04:50:39 +0000 UTC]

Yup yup.

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SentimentallyScared In reply to without-chainsaw [2006-09-05 14:27:30 +0000 UTC]

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without-chainsaw [2006-09-05 04:23:07 +0000 UTC]

Don't fret, darling. Tomorro will a brighter day.

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SentimentallyScared In reply to without-chainsaw [2006-09-05 04:25:30 +0000 UTC]

Tommorrow always is. Thank you.

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