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The men went off to work, thinking there was no wayHe could get all the boys, it would take him all day,
Then the Tickler looked round, and he saw him a treat
For about half the year, boys had mostly bare feet;
And just then at Midsummer, so pleasant and green
Not a shoe on a teen boy in town could be seen,
But the boys were unsure, though their feet were all bare
Who'd be foot-tickled first? Noone wanted to dare;
So the Tickler announced in a mesmeric voice,
"If you don't volunteer, I'll just make my own choice,"
As the Tickler approached, all the boys quickly ran
But he soon caught them up and then foot-tickled Dan;
Then the Barefootin Tickler caught Aaron and Bruce
When he tickled their barefeet they couldn't get loose,
ext he foot-tickled Jeff and then David and Jay
They were all way too ticklish to squirm safe away;
Then he said as he foot-tickled Tony and Jon
"Just start laughing! Don't fight! Get your giggle game on!"
Though Stephen and Douglas both started to wriggle
With barefeet so ticklish they both had to giggle;
He relentlessly tickled both Ronnie and Lee
At the very same time as their laughter rose free,
By the time that the Tickler got Kevin and Mark
Barefeet-tickled hysterics rang all through the park;
Even tough Tim surrendered, his laughter soon rose
As the Tickler twitched fingers between all his toes,
Then he basked in his triumph, the feeling was sweet
He just couldn't resist all those new adult feet;
Tickled Kian and Nicky and Bryan and Shane
They were laughing so wildly, they sounded insane,
All the foot-tickled laughter made every boy drop
Laughing harder and harder, as noone could stop;
And there all the teen boys in the town could be found
Barefoot, laughing and helpless, all rolling around
As the Barefootin Tickler said, "Good for the lads
Now it's time to foot-tickle their uncles and dads!"
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Comments: 21
Captainblackwing [2012-04-10 22:46:13 +0000 UTC]
I figured as much since you wanted it to last 8 parts, I believe. Good luck
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seto749 In reply to Captainblackwing [2012-04-11 12:20:38 +0000 UTC]
Well, I've already written through Page 37. The pacing gets slower naturally because it's been written in fits and starts whenever I've had time and a sense of direction.
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Captainblackwing In reply to seto749 [2012-04-13 00:08:26 +0000 UTC]
Wow...37 pages, that amazing. I didn't realize that you can carry a poem for 37 pages
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seto749 In reply to Captainblackwing [2012-04-13 02:38:01 +0000 UTC]
Easy enough when one wants something to keep going. Look at TF and his long series of drawings.
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Captainblackwing In reply to seto749 [2012-04-13 21:22:21 +0000 UTC]
I guess, but I've always thought it was easier to create long series with drawings rather then words.
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seto749 In reply to Captainblackwing [2012-04-14 01:19:22 +0000 UTC]
Well, it probably depends on which one can do.
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Captainblackwing In reply to seto749 [2012-04-14 19:41:15 +0000 UTC]
True,It's easy if you're actually good at it.
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Captainblackwing [2012-04-10 18:21:31 +0000 UTC]
Good Work! It has a similar rhythm to "Casey at the bat"
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seto749 In reply to Captainblackwing [2012-04-10 22:19:19 +0000 UTC]
Not dissimilar; you're right, just with slightly different length lines. The tempo is about to slow considerably as we become much more deliberate in future weeks.
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seto749 In reply to FireDude21 [2012-03-26 15:48:02 +0000 UTC]
I can picture it now. Supposing we could gather all the fine young men of the appropriate age from all of DA, if anyone would be capable of blitzing through the entire group and tickling all of them into helpless hysterics, you'd definitely be on the short list.
That could make an interesting tournament.
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FireDude21 In reply to seto749 [2012-03-26 16:33:30 +0000 UTC]
LOL I agree, that'd be an awesome tournament We'd need a tickle trophy for the victor, and ticklee trophy for the best victim
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seto749 In reply to FireDude21 [2012-03-26 20:09:06 +0000 UTC]
Nice. The tickler's trophy could have a working tickling implement, so that the champion could then use it in his future tickling encounters.
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FireDude21 In reply to seto749 [2012-03-26 20:22:10 +0000 UTC]
A gold plated brush, toothbrush, or feather?
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seto749 In reply to FireDude21 [2012-03-26 23:46:29 +0000 UTC]
That's the ticket! We could have trophies for runner-up placements as well; after all, if you're a prohibitive favourite, the others need some incentive to compete or you'll be unopposed, which would not make for the most exciting tournament.
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FireDude21 In reply to seto749 [2012-03-27 02:53:06 +0000 UTC]
Very true Maybe some special ticklees as "trophies" too
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seto749 In reply to FireDude21 [2012-03-27 13:28:19 +0000 UTC]
Now that is an excellent idea.
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seto749 In reply to seto749 [2012-03-30 13:10:56 +0000 UTC]
We could really ratchet up the competitive factor and have the winners get to tickle the losers. That might be fun.
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