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Published: 2012-04-10 13:22:50 +0000 UTC; Views: 400; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 4
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Description Then the Tickler beheld as he took a look down
Great big bare tickled feet of each guy in the town,
Too weakened by laughter for one final giggle
From barefeet too tickled to give one more wriggle;
Their pure bliss was a sign of the Tickler's sweet win
As each face wore a huge goofy foot-tickled grin,
When the Tickler then spoke, he said, "I've had a ball
It's been wicked fun here tootsie ticklin you all;
I sure can't say I've found in my travels and tours
Any town with more big ticklish barefeet than yours,
Now whenever you need good hysterical fun
Barefoot-tickle each other, my work here is done!"

Not a man or a boy could believe what he'd heard
They all gasped in surprise at this shocking last word,
As the smiles on their faces all froze and then fell
All their bare tickled feet looked unhappy as well;
Then the guys swallowed all that remained of their pride
And thy pleaded their case then, as one and all cried,
"No-one's ever just tickled our barefeet before
As as much as we've laughed, we all want to laugh more;
It's just so wicked awesome, dude, we never knew
Our big tootsies would love gettin tickled by you,
Who could tell barefoot tickles would move us this way
We're too ticklish to lose you - please dude, can't you stay?"

In a moment they all heard the Tickler reply
"Dudes, I've gotta be going, and I'll tell you why,
I'm really flattered you asked, but I've much work to do
Other towns and bare feet need my great kitchy-koo;
When I've tickled them all, I'll be glad to come back!"
So the guys wished him well in his plan of attack,
"We'll all gladly foot-tickle each other til when
You can come back and tickle our barefeet again;"
As he scanned the horizon, intent on his task
A small ripple of wind caught the Tickler's black mask,
They all gasped with surprise when the gust blew it free
And they saw that the Barefootin Tickler was... ME!!!
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Comments: 7

Taciturnium [2012-04-11 00:40:23 +0000 UTC]

Ooo! That is great, I love the ending!

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seto749 In reply to Taciturnium [2012-04-11 12:39:37 +0000 UTC]

In previous (and shorter) versions, the narrator was simply one of the great tickled multitude, but I thought this time around it might be fun to throw in a bit of a twist. But that explains why there was no reference to "when BT tickled me" in the earlier portion.

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Captainblackwing [2012-04-10 22:57:23 +0000 UTC]

Lol, clever ending

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seto749 In reply to Captainblackwing [2012-04-11 12:33:19 +0000 UTC]

Many thanks.

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Captainblackwing In reply to seto749 [2012-04-11 22:55:46 +0000 UTC]

Welcome, but I figured it was you who were the tickler the whole time, I didn't realize the identity was in question

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seto749 In reply to Captainblackwing [2012-04-12 16:44:39 +0000 UTC]

I keep toying with rewriting things from different angles quite frequently. Maybe I fear finally finding the "Perfect Version" of anything.

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Captainblackwing In reply to seto749 [2012-04-14 19:47:11 +0000 UTC]

Lol, there's too much pressure in finding the "perfect version" of anything. I just find the one I like

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