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seto749 — Epic Poem, Page Four [NSFW]
Published: 2012-04-03 15:19:00 +0000 UTC; Views: 500; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 4
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Description Then the Barefootin Tickler proceeded with care
As he let them stop laughing, then issued a dare,
That he had to determine who'd laugh like a dunce
If he foot-tickled all their huge barefeet at once;
Now the thought of more tickling filled each dude with fear
Just considering how big a fool he'd appear,
But their foot-tickled laughter had left them so weak
That the chance of successful resistance was bleak;
And inside of each dude curiosity grew
Were his friends' great big barefeet all that ticklish too,
So with no real resistance, each man and teen boy
Gathered in the town square to the Tickler's great joy;

So the Tickler just tied them and bound them right there
He arranged all the guys in the shape of a square,
"Now this way I can just barefeet-tickle you all
Soon I'll get you all laughing, let's have us a ball!"
So he tickled their arches and tickled their heels
Each dude just had to laugh, thinking, "How good it feels!"
All quaked to the touch of his finger or feather
And really enjoyed being laughing together;
As his feathers ran over their ticklish bare soles
They all helplessly giggled, achieving his goals,
All the laughter and squirms from their foot-tickled plight
Gave to each man and teen a weird twinge of delight;

Soon each dude's crazy laughter rang loud in great sound
As the Tickler redoubled his pace all around,
As he licked in between all their fast-wiggling toes
Through their helpless hysterics, their spirits all rose;
Then the signs of a pure indescribable high
Came to show in the faces of every last guy,
They accepted they all craved his foot-tickling treat
And they begged, "Dude! Don't stop! Please keep TICKLING our FEET!"
So the Barefootin Tickler, assured that he'd won
Gave them all they could take of bare feet-tickled fun,
As they laughed until noone could laugh any more
Full of tickle-foot bliss that they'd come to adore;
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Comments: 19

FireDude21 [2012-05-06 17:17:13 +0000 UTC]

Wow! Sounds like a blast!

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seto749 In reply to FireDude21 [2012-05-06 18:08:43 +0000 UTC]

Yes; I could easily see either you or TF holding a whole town in thrall, which made it funny that I started this long before either of you appeared here.

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FireDude21 In reply to seto749 [2012-05-06 18:11:45 +0000 UTC]

LOL it'd be a challenge I wouldn't mind taking I'm sure TF feels the same!

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seto749 In reply to FireDude21 [2012-05-06 22:56:56 +0000 UTC]

I'm sure. I wonder, if the two of you worked together, how large a municipality you could subdue.

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FireDude21 In reply to seto749 [2012-05-07 02:19:27 +0000 UTC]

Now there's a thought...no one could resist!

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seto749 In reply to FireDude21 [2012-05-07 03:09:44 +0000 UTC]

I'm sure I couldn't, for one. You'd just both have to promise not to ask me which of you were the superiour tickler, as that would be real torture.

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FireDude21 In reply to seto749 [2012-05-07 03:31:20 +0000 UTC]

LOL, especially since you wouldn't want to piss any of us off...

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seto749 In reply to FireDude21 [2012-05-07 14:51:51 +0000 UTC]

Ooh, I hadn't been considering the angle of angry tickles. If I were in a mischievous mood, I'd arrange a leak to each of you that I was leaning towards favouring the other. But then I'm insatiable.

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FireDude21 In reply to seto749 [2012-05-08 16:08:38 +0000 UTC]

LOL yep Angry tickles are hell for the victims LOL

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seto749 In reply to FireDude21 [2012-05-08 22:12:21 +0000 UTC]

Or heaven. I did tell you, I'm insatiable.

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FireDude21 In reply to seto749 [2012-05-08 23:19:57 +0000 UTC]

LOL

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Captainblackwing [2012-04-10 22:50:33 +0000 UTC]

It continues to be a great poem, also it's difficult to suddenly change a poem's pace, so no worries

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seto749 In reply to Captainblackwing [2012-04-11 12:33:06 +0000 UTC]

It helps when it recites fairly smoothly.

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Captainblackwing In reply to seto749 [2012-04-12 05:12:51 +0000 UTC]

True, but you can read the slow down in your poem, which is nice since it alerts you to it's ending

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seto749 In reply to Captainblackwing [2012-04-12 16:45:11 +0000 UTC]

It gets a great deal slower ere long, but that ought to please the pundits.

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Captainblackwing In reply to seto749 [2012-04-14 19:44:36 +0000 UTC]

Lol, well it's a great poem, no matter who it pleases or doesn't please

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Taciturnium [2012-04-04 01:40:55 +0000 UTC]

AMAZING!
I love how they enjoyed it in the end!

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seto749 In reply to Taciturnium [2012-04-04 04:25:20 +0000 UTC]

Very glad you enjoyed it. And it's a long ride ahead.

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Taciturnium In reply to seto749 [2012-04-04 13:28:47 +0000 UTC]

Well good! I hope so!

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