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Published: 2004-04-12 21:29:41 +0000 UTC; Views: 273; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 47
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Description Living to count.
1ne and 6ix
is a slow process [progression].
The mechanics of
harm; abandon (1)
Such selfish act,
such cause. (2)
A reason for the
words,
the paper and departure. (3)
Disperato (4)
and finale.
Tension in the beats [breathing].
(5)
Silence.
[Close your eyes, child.
  You don't need to see this]

Exhale.
Immolation.

(6)
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Comments: 4

fuKtHislOVesHit [2004-05-03 07:05:47 +0000 UTC]

wow i luve it
its deep man im still hoping i got it... lol
even if i dont get it i still like it. alot.

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shadezero In reply to fuKtHislOVesHit [2004-05-03 10:51:22 +0000 UTC]

One thing I love about poetry, at time you can appreciate it even if you dont fully understand it ^_^ thanks muchly for the comment, im glad you enjoyed!

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Tsyoku [2004-04-12 23:52:02 +0000 UTC]

I love it. It's beautifully complex

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shadezero In reply to Tsyoku [2004-04-13 03:57:07 +0000 UTC]

Thanks ^_^ just hope the meaning shows through.

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