HOME | DD
Published: 2005-11-30 06:01:48 +0000 UTC; Views: 314; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 3
Redirect to original
Description
Here she is againThe lonliness has come again
Her heart has hit the floor again
And when it stops, it never ends.
Her mind has gone wondering again
Rivers on her cheeks again
Her heart has been stepped on again
I wonder when her pain will end.
Smiles are becoming fake again
Light in her eyes has ceased again
Warmness in her touch has left again
I hope this pain will one day end.
She has veiled her mind and soul again
In the cobwebs of her mind again
Another one has left again
Her pain it seems, will never end.
Related content
Comments: 6
Shadow-Secrets In reply to did [2005-12-16 06:22:03 +0000 UTC]
Thank you very much <3 and yea, sad is what I was feeling.
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
SeraphimAce [2005-12-06 06:31:43 +0000 UTC]
It's good to see you post again
my downtrodden distant friend
I hate to see you down again
but it's in times like these
that you need your friends
so talk to me (I know you will)
and let me know just how you feel
maybe we can sort this out
and see what it's all about
then you will be whole again
this is my wish for my special friend...
WOW I'm TIRED!!!! IM me soon!
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
Shadow-Secrets In reply to SeraphimAce [2005-12-08 02:22:50 +0000 UTC]
AAHHH!! I shall IM you soon, and tanka for that b-e-a-u-tiful post ^-^ Hope you're well! <3
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
ShadedRain [2005-11-30 07:00:22 +0000 UTC]
Too much of the word 'again.' Sorry, but it really takes away from the piece.
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
Shadow-Secrets In reply to ShadedRain [2005-12-01 04:11:58 +0000 UTC]
Yes, I knew it sounded tacky, but I was tired and didnt want to work on it, maybe I could fix it soon. Thank you though, much appreciated ^^
👍: 0 ⏩: 0





