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Published: 2004-08-14 14:29:11 +0000 UTC; Views: 89; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 1
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Confusionthick with filth
stirring in my blood
blinding me with its blood
twisting and turning into lies
holding me tightly to them
dragging me down
down, down, down
Not enough strength
to escape its grasp
becoming weaker with each move
soon enough it will be over
No more suffering for my heart
its cracked sillouette
allready fading into thick
shades of grey
fading into black
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Comments: 11
tweek1201 [2004-09-26 03:45:57 +0000 UTC]
there is much fluff in my life as well.... if thats what u tried 2 get 2...
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ShadedRain [2004-08-16 19:57:34 +0000 UTC]
Nice work, but I think it sounds like part of a poem... like a middle or an end... rather than a complete piece. I think you should add to it.
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Shadow-Secrets In reply to ShadedRain [2004-08-16 20:51:32 +0000 UTC]
lol, Thats what I thought, guess I'm not the only one. Thank you ^^ I'll try to do that
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moldycheesepuff [2004-08-14 22:49:29 +0000 UTC]
beautiful poem.... HOLY WORRIED AS H WORD BATMAN!!! you ok???
im here for you
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Shadow-Secrets In reply to moldycheesepuff [2004-08-14 23:13:08 +0000 UTC]
lol, I'ma ask if your ok!! but yesh, I am fine heh
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moldycheesepuff In reply to Shadow-Secrets [2004-08-16 04:27:22 +0000 UTC]
alright... but this worries me for all i know it could be like that metallica song fade to black
and thats not a very happy and/or inspirational song
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Shadow-Secrets In reply to moldycheesepuff [2004-08-16 17:04:30 +0000 UTC]
lol, I am ok, no worries. But yea, I'v been bored without you to talk to!
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moldycheesepuff In reply to Shadow-Secrets [2004-08-19 21:29:18 +0000 UTC]
lol, awwwww *blushes* lol
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