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Shadow-Secrets — My Legacy
Published: 2004-12-19 10:16:40 +0000 UTC; Views: 141; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 4
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Description Hands are banging
raging against the floor
Bloodied and bruised
Eyes are closed
I'm flying now
Denting the floor
With all of my strength
Teeth are clentched
Going to wretch
Fight it
Take it down
Beat it out of me
I'm overwhelmed
It's time to go now
One last hit
I'm breaking through now
And starting to fall
Blood is pouring
Tears overflowing
Heart is stopping
And I am done
Lying in a puddle of blood
   This is my legacy...
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Comments: 6

altair [2004-12-20 01:24:21 +0000 UTC]

I really like this, it's very visual and well written and has a good buildup to the last line. You can never judge your own work, if I tried that I would never post anything and would probably burn it too...yeah. Anyway, good job!

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Shadow-Secrets In reply to altair [2004-12-21 10:28:19 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very muchness, I guess your right. I think my writings would be right beside yours in the fire if I kept on judging it myself. Thank you again ^^

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glarawen [2004-12-19 10:18:19 +0000 UTC]

I like this. I think it has a really great flow.

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Shadow-Secrets In reply to glarawen [2004-12-19 10:20:20 +0000 UTC]

Thank you ^^ meant alot seeing as how I thought it sucked >.<

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glarawen In reply to Shadow-Secrets [2004-12-19 10:22:33 +0000 UTC]

You are your own worst critic!

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Shadow-Secrets In reply to glarawen [2004-12-19 10:32:42 +0000 UTC]

^^ true words!

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